2024英语一模作文

2024英语一模作文（精选7篇）

1.2024英语一模作文 篇一

A Unforgettable Thing

There is one thing I still remember now。It is the first day I went to the zoo。

有一件事我现在还记得，那就是我第一次去动物园。

When I was only five years old my mother took me there. I was pleased to see so many real animals at the same time. They seemed so lovely and active. I spent a nice day. But on my way home I began to feel sorry for them. They were taken away from their parents and friends and also far away from the nature. They must have felt lonely I thought. Every day the only thing they could do was to sit there and wait for food.

当我5岁的时候，妈妈带我到那儿。我很高兴看到这么多真实的动物在同一时间。他们似乎又活泼又可爱。我花了一个愉快的一天。但在我回家的路上，我开始觉得对不起他们。他们被带到远离自己的父母和朋友，也远离了大自然。他们一定会感到孤单，我想。每天，他们唯一可以做的事就是坐在那里，等待食物。

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2.2024英语一模作文 篇二

（1）

Nowadays people have a wide selection when they go traveling.Some prefer a package tour, while others choose self-organized tours.As for me, I like package tours better.First of all, it is safe to be led by tour guides.Tourists can have an idea of the dangerous places such as cliffs and iceburgs according to the introduction given by their tour guides.Also, when we go to somewhere unfamiliar, we’d better avoid getting lost and avoid going to the spots that are not worth the ticket money!

Second, in a package tour, tourists never have to worry about the food, the vehicles and the accommodations.All they’ve got to do is just to put on their coats and press the “shoot” button on the camera!Furthermore, a group of tourists can often enjoy discounts in restaurants and hotels.Third, the group members can easily make friends with each other.Getting along well enough, they may even come to figure out the plan for their next trip together!

As you can see, what a wise choice it is to go on a package tour!I’m really looking forward to having my personal safety, daily necessities and social network guaranteed by a tourist agency.（2）

Gone are the days that we stay at home during vacation.Instead, we travel here and there.However, some people prefer package tour while some people tend to choose self-organized tour.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer package tour.It not only costs less but also

provides us with tour guides.So convenient is it that we don’t need to worry about get ting lost in a totally new city, and guides will show us around all the places of interest.Furthermore, package tour makes it easy for us to make friends with different people from various cities.In the tourist team, we may establish some precious friendships.However, every coin has its two sides.Package tour is not free enough, which may

result in much inconvenience.For example, we must follow the schedule of travel agency, thus limiting our free time.To sum up, each of the ways has its own advantages as well as disadvantages.What matters most is that we should choose the better way which is fit for ourselves.(3)

While recently more and more people are in favour of self-organized tour, I always hold the idea that package tour is still my favourite.Above all, package tour can bring much convenience.I still remember the time when I first went abroad.I didn’t know how to go through the customs and fortunately the tour guide helped me.Besides, I don’t have to think much about

spending too much money as package tour has a lot of discounts.I can stay in a 4-star hotel at a rather low cost.That must be nice.What’s more, package tour brings more than travelling.We are sure to meet

strangers from different parts of China and within several days of staying together, we share a lot of our experiences of traveling and thus we become friends.I believe that is much more fascinating than just traveling itself.Many people may criticize that package tour lacks freedom.However, it just depends on how you define it.When I’m traveling, I am free of worries and I’m in the realm of freedom.So, come on!Join our package tour!You’re sure to meet with more splendors.（4）

Nowadays，people have more ways to travel.Some people prefer package tour due to its low expenses and the guide available.But for me, I prefer self-organized tour.An obvious advantage is that the timetable is more flexible.You can arrange the schedule on the way at any time.You don’t have to visit the tourist attractions one by one as you do during package tours.Without the time limit, you can get closer to the local culture, especially in some unfamiliar area.Local inhabitants can tell you more than the guides do.You can enjoy to the greatest extent at your destination.However, self-organized tour may be exhausting that you need to manage the meals and accommodations by yourself.But to be optimistic, you can enjoy the local cuisine more.In my opinion, you can take a package tour or get enough information on the Internet before you decide to take a self-organized one.（5）

Nowadays there are a variety of traveling ways from which people may choose.Some people choose a self-organized tour while others choose a package one.From my perspective, I prefer the former one.Travel is one of the best ways to release oneself and relieve the pressure.In a self-organized tour, people around me are all my friends and family members, people who I enjoy being with.So I will feel more free and casual during the tour, which ensures that the tour will be more fun and reach the goal of relaxing ourselves.By organizing the tour by myself, the schedule is tailored for my needs.I can arrange the destinations as I like.This will help me learn more from the tour whether the history, the traditions or the culture of my destinations, making the whole tour more meaningful.I am certain to collect a lot of precious memory there.However, there is something inconvenient.I have to deal with my meals and hotels.But as every coin has two sides, my friends and I can pick what we prefer to taste and where to stay in the course.After all, food culture is also interesting and important.And we can choose a more satisfying hotel to stay in.The key of travel is to experience.I believe my friends and I will experience a lot of beautiful things during a self-organized tour.And that is enough.(6)

With the rapid development of China’s economy, people tend to go traveling to relieve their pressure.When it comes to how to travel, opinions vary from person to person.Some people are in favor of package tour.They argue that it costs less but has

3.高三英语一模训练题 篇三

阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

A

Dear Sara，

As we drove off from Columbia，I wanted to write a letter to you to tell you all that is on my mind.First，I want to tell you how proud we are.Getting into Columbia College shows what a great well-rounded student you are.Your academic，artistic，and social skills have truly blossomed in the last few years.Whether it is getting the highest grade in mathematics，completing your elegant fashion design，successfully selling your painted running shoes，or becoming one of the top speakers in Model United Nations，you have become a talented and accomplished young woman.You should be as proud of yourself as we are.

College will be the most important years in your life.It is in college that you will truly discover what learning is about.This will be the period where you go from teacher-taught to master-inspired，after which you must become self-learner.So do take each subject seriously，and even if what you learn isn’t critical for your life，the skills of learning will be important to you forever.

Follow your passion in college.Take courses you think you will enjoy.Don’t be trapped in what others think or say.Do your best in classes，but don’t let pressure get to you.Your mother and I have no expectations for your grades.If you graduate and learn something in your four years，we would feel happy.So please don’t give yourself pressure.

I told your mom I’m writing this letter，and asked what she wanted me to say.She thought and said：“Just ask her to take care of herself.”Please listen to your mother and take care of yourself.

So please treasure your college years，make the best of your free time，and become an independent thinker;learn and grow through your successes and challenges.

Love，

Dad(& Mom)

21.Sara’performance in the last few years makes his parents ____________.

A.annoyed B.proud C.upset D.concerned

22.What did Father mainly write about in Paragraph 2 ?

A.Learning skills. B.College courses.

C.Learning attitude. D.Ways of self-learning.

23.What do we know about Morn and Dad from the letter?

A.They expect too much of Sara.

B.They put lots of pressure on Sara.

C.They love their daughter very much.

D.They advise Sara to make more friends.

B

Christmas in the United States is traditionally a time of gift-giving and family gatherings.But small towns across the country have their own traditions.

Middleburg，a small town in the state of Virginia，is known for its horses.For more than 50 years，Middleburg has organized a yearly Christmas parade(游行).Men and women ride horses through the woods and fields.They follow hunting dogs as they search for a wild fox.But first，these hunters ride in the yearly parade，wearing their bright red hunting clothes and hats.

John Hale，a citizen of Middleburg says many city people visit his town.“We have a lot of people from an urban area that come to visit，but it incorporates a lot of the o1d traditions.” The nighttime hay ride is one such tradition.Small groups gather under the moonlight on an open wagon filled with hay.The passengers sing as farm horses pull the wagon slowly across the fields.

There are some newer traditions，too.Trey Matheu works at the nearby Salamander Resort.He says a visit to Middleburg is a chance to slow down for a day.He says Middleburg can be a calming，peaceful place without tension.

“Middleburg is an opportunity to take a step back，to take a deep breath，and understand that even though life is moving on at a very fast pace，there’s really an opportunity where you’re allowed to step off for a little bit.”

Parade organizers say more than 13，000 people attend even in below-freezing weather. But if you ask，you will hear many different reasons why people come to watch the parade：

“I come here because I’m from a small town. I like how everybody comes together.”“I live right down that street;right there.And that’s my dog.”

Middleburg looks its best at Christmastime.That may be why so many people return each year.

24.Which of the following can be the best title for the text?

A.Middleburg Christmas parade

B.A small town known for horses

C.Christmas traditions in Middleburg

D. Newer traditions at Christmastime

25.At Christmas，people in Middleburg usually ___________.

A.visit friends and families

B.feed farm horses with hay

C.hunt for dogs in the woods

D.ride in the yearly parade

26.According to Trey Matheu，why do people visit Middleburg?

A.To relax themselves.

B.To enjoy the fresh air.

C.To escape competition.

D.To challenge themselves.

27.What do we know about the small town Middleburg?

A.It makes a large profit from tourism.

B.It attracts many people each year.

C.It is a good place for family gatherings.

D.It doesn’t respect Christmas traditions.

C

Building a company website is one of the most important parts of creating a successful business.But designing a website can be time consuming and expensive.Web designers are difficult to,work with，and even though you’re paying them.There are cheaper ways to establish your company online，and Wix.com stands out among them.

Wix.com offers free HTML5 and Flash website design that you can do on your own，without having to pay for a pricey web designer.With unlimited space for as many pages as you want，customized looks，photo galleries，and blog platform capabilities，social networking buttons，Wix has everything a business of any size needs to make an impact online.You get full control over what information fills in the blanks，and you don’t have to know a thing about HTML to make this work.The way your website looks says a lot about your company.Wix does that，and it does it for free.Another thing that makes Wix the most affordable option in creating a website is that you don’t have to pay for a separate web host—every page created on Wix is hosted on Wix，free of charge.

The Internet is the marketplace of ideas：your company needs to share what you think.If you think just because you don’t sell a product online you don’t need a website，you’re dead wrong.No matter what kind of business you have，if you want to reach an audience，you want to have a website that speaks to people.Wix lets you do that as quickly and easily as possible for free.

If you have a bigger budget，Wix has more options than just the free website design. You can choose to upgrade(升级)to the ad-less version which won’t fill up your customer’s screens when they visit your site.But if the most important thing to you is getting your company’s name online right now，try Wix.com today.

28.Wix.com is meant to _____________.

A.sell products on the Internet

B.attract more customers online

C.build a company’s website cheap

D.collect any possible information

29.What is Paragraph 2 mainly about?

A.Ways of finding free service.

B.Advantages of Wix.com.

C.Skills of creating websites.

D.Tricks of running a company.

30.If you create a company website on Wix，you ____________.

A.have to be a good web designer

B.won’t do it easily and quickly

C.can share ideas with customers

D.must upgrade to the ad-less version

31.What’s the purpose of the text?

A.To teach a budget lesson.

B.To make an advertisement.

C.To present a website design.

D.To introduce a new business.

D

If you think that running marathons will help you live a long and healthy life，new research may come as a shock.According to a recent scientific study，people who do a very strenuous workout are as likely to die as people who do no exercise at all.

Scientists in Denmark have been studying over 1，000 joggers and non-joggers for 12 years.The death rates from the sample group indicate that people who jog at a moderate pace two or three times a week for less than two and a half hours in total are least likely to die.The best speed to jog at was found to be about 5 miles per hour.The research suggests that people who jog more than three times a week or at higher speeds of over 7 mph die at the same rate as non-joggers.The scientists think that this is because strenuous exercise causes structural changes to the heart and arteries(动脉).Over time，this can cause serious injuries.

Peter Schnohr，a researcher in Copenhagen，said，“If your goal is to decrease risk of death and improve life expectancy，jogging a few times a week at a moderate pace is a good strategy.Anything more is not just unnecessary，and it may be harmful.”

The implications of this are that moderate forms of exercise such as tai chi，yoga and brisk walking may be better for us than“iron man”events，triathlons and long-distance running and cycling.According to Jacob Louis Marott，another researcher involved in the study，“You don’t actually have to do that much to have a good impact on your health.And perhaps you shouldn’t actually do too much”.

32.The underlined word“strenuous”in Paragraph l is closest in meaning to“___________”.

A.hard B.regular

C.practical D.flexible

33.The author presents some figures in Paragraph 2 to ___________.

A.suggest giving up jogging

B.show risks of doing sports

C.provide supportive evidence

D.introduce the research process

34.According to the scientists，why is too much exercise harmful?

A.It may injure the heart and arteries.

B.It can make the body tired out.

C.It will bring much pressure.

D.It consumes too much energy.

35.What can be inferred from the text?

A.No exercise at all is the best choice.

B.More exercise means a healthier life.

C.Marathons runners are least likely to die.

D.Proper exercise contributes to good health.

第二节(共5小题;每小题2分，满分10分)

根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

You think you know your dog. 36 She probably recognizes you when she sees you.But can a dog tell by simply looking at you whether you have a happy or an angry expression on your face?Researchers in Austria have taught pet dogs to know the difference.

37 When dog owners shout or speak in a strong，sharp voice，dogs often act guilty and quietly move away from the area.

Recently，researchers found that dogs can look at our faces，and tell the difference between a smile and a frown.The animals were able to recognize a look of approval from one of disapproval.Researchers at the University of Veterinary Medicine performed a series of experiments. 38 They showed the dogs two pictures of either the upper or lower half of a person’s face.On one picture，the person looked happy.The other appeared angry.The dogs were then shown images of the eyes or mouths of people they had never seen before.

39 Once the dogs learned to recognize which image was happy or angry，they could easily identify the same expressions in pictures of any face.Future studies will try to show whether dogs can learn the meaning of facial expressions. 40

The researchers’findings were published in the journal Current Biology.They provide the first solid evidence that humans are not the only species that can read the body language of another species.

A.Dogs are very aware of sound.

B.Dogs have feelings just as you do.

C.But how well does your dog know you?

D.They were also shown the left half of the faces used in training.

E.Some dogs are very unhappy when they are left alone for a long time.

F.They taught dogs to recognize facial expressions.

G.For example，whether a frown shows that someone is angry.

第三部分 英语知识运用(共两节，满分45分)

第一节 完形填空(共20小题;每小题1.5分，满分30分)

阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

Mr.Jackson was blind from birth.He owned a fruit 41 on a very busy street. 42 he was visually disabled，he ran his business pretty handsomely.He could see nothing and he could only 43 the things within his reach. 44 ，he was able to handle it and was content with everything he had.

One day his son came to him.He told Mr.Jackson in 45 that he read in the newspaper of a 46 who could operate on his eyes and allow him to see.The father and son traveled to the doctor and paid for the 47 .

After the operation，the doctor asked Mr.Jackson：“What is the first thing you are 48 to see when I take the bandages off?”He replied，“I really want to see my beautiful 49 on my stand!”

The doctor and the son 50 Mr.Jackson down to the busy street where his fruit stand had been located for so many years.The doctor 51 unwrapped the bandages 52 he could lay his eyes on the beautiful fruit!Mr.Jackson was so full of 53 that he could finally see his life’s work—taking care of his fruit!After a few hours of 54 his beautiful fiuit stand, he looked down the street both ways and saw there were quite a few fruit stands in both directions.He looked 55 the street and saw many other fruit stands.He spent so much time looking at other people’s fruit stands and 56 the competition that soon his own business 57 .

From Mr.Jackson’s failure，we should know that everyone is a 58 individual with different fingerprints，DNA and thinking.What we need to do is just be ourselves and 59 everyone else to be who they are.Mind our own business and we should never be afraid of 60 .

41.A.stand B.company C.store D.center

42.A.Because B.As C.Although D.When

43.A.remember B.describe C.imagine D.feel

44.A.Therefore B.However C.Otherwise D.Besides

45.A.pride B.doubt C.excitement D.surprise

46.A.doctor B.nurse C.chemist D.volunteer

47.A.information B.medicine C.service D.operation

48.A.nervous B.1ucky C.eager D.afraid

49.A.flowers B.vegetables C.fruit D.clothing

50.A.sent B.accompanied C.followed D.invited

51.A.suddenly B.curiously C.carefully D.firmly

52.A.so that B.in case C.even if D.if only

53.A.regret B.joy C.courage D.relief

54.A.enjoying B.checking C.judging D.making

55.A.above B.within C.through D.across

56.A.preparing for B.focusing on C.worrying about D.taking up

57.A.improved B.failed C.appeared D.expanded

58.A.simple B.reliable C.unique D.perfect

59.A.force B.require C.persuade D.allow

60.A.competitions B.changes C.differences D.disabilities

第二节(共10小题;每小题1.5分，满分15分)

阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

Observers say Americans want more choices and fresh food when 61 (choose)where and what to eat.This trend is one reason why the fast food restaurant McDonald’s has struggled financially.

McDonald’s is one of the best-known 62 (restaurant)in the U.S.and even around the world， 63 these days the company leaders are seeing numbers they probably do not like.In the last quarter of ，McDonald’s income dropped by about$300 million.The January earnings report brought more bad news.Worldwide sales dropped for the 64 (eight)month in a row and even more than expected.

McDonald’s is 65 (work)hard to get their customers back.In January，the company ran an advertisement during the Super Bowl.The football game is the most watched TV event every year in the U.S.McDonald’s has wanted 66 (reach)those viewers.

Shake Shack is 67 new kind of restaurant becoming popular in the U.S.The restaurants are not“fast food.” They are known as“fast casual.” 68 McDonald’s is struggling to get their customers back，Shake Shack is doing well financially.The New York-based burger chain had a very 69 (success)IPO，or initial public offering，of shares at the end of January. 70 its first day of trading，Shake Shack went from $21 a share to just under $ 46 a share.

4.日照港中一模英语试卷分析 篇四

在2014年的四月份这个出春季，日照刚中的孩子们迎来了奋战已久的一考试。现在考试已告一段落，成绩已经出炉，作为环球雅思的一名英语老师对于所教学生的考试试卷做一个详细的分析。

这次考试是由学校的科目老师出的题，对于试卷的各类题的分析如下：

听力部分：这次港中的听力是由老师抽取的平时学生用来练习听力的资料书当中的一篇，所以有的班级做过的这个部分在考试当中会比较占优势。这次听力比较接近中考难度，所以有部分平时听力比较薄弱的会给整体成绩拉分。

单选：这次的单选出的题目比较难，有几道题目接近高考试题，比如第24题是高中才会考到的，这种题目在中考当中是不会考的，有部分题虽然属于中考难度，但是出的知识点有点偏，例如名词辨析，动词固定搭配的词义辨析，考查到的词义平时几乎是没有讲过的，造成很多学生都不会做，所以在这次考试中，很多学生都失了很多分数。

完型与阅读：完型与阅读出的题目也比较有难度，很多学生都反映看不懂，首先对于完型来说，篇幅比较长，单词量比较大，在理解文章的意思上有一定的难度，再其次完型选项当中的词义辨析题中的很多选项的词义太相近，有点接近高中的难度，所以在完型上想要拿到高分是很难得，有很多学生没看懂就直接凭感觉做题，所以完型实际上并没有真正考察出学生的真正水平。阅读也和完型差不多，三篇阅读都不简单，尤其是后两篇阅读涉及到了环境保护以及西方历史人物，在文章理解上就增大了很大程度上的难度，阅读理解的题目很多答案区分不明显，这使孩子在做题的时候弄不清楚要选什么，考察方式比较适合高中的题目。

第二卷：第二卷的整体难度要比第一卷要低一点，比较适合中考的难度，单词的考察和阅读表达以及作文出的题目比较适中，但是翻译和选词填空稍微有点难度，在这两个大题上丢失的分值比较大。作文考察的是演讲稿，这类作文平时考查的比较少，学校老师对作文的分类很少讲，这次批改试卷作文改的比较严一点，所以很多学生作文分数也不高。第二卷总的来说虽然难度不是特别大，但是想要抓到分数不容易。

5.2024英语一模作文 篇五

温州市第二十二中学 张晓玲

一：试卷总评

大家好！我是张晓玲，来自温州市第二十二中学。今天有幸代表我们高三英语备课组发言，请大家多多关照，多提宝贵意见！我们组认为2010年温州市高三第一次适应性测试（英语试题）（简称一模）参照09新课标新高考的题型和总体结构，主观题部分保留短文改错和作文题材，要求学生写一篇新闻报道及学生的感受和评价。这是一份难度适中，较能考察学生英语实际水平的试卷，体现了高考“选拔性”考试的特点。

一模英语试卷单选部分较全面的考查了高中英语语法现象，除冠词，代词，介词，动词，名词，动词的时态和语态，连词，非谓语动词，定语从句外，还考查了考试词义辨析的能力，如7，10，18和20； 侧重考查了4道省略句和其他语法点的结合（第8，11，15，19题）。个别题目略有难度，如题12，15。我校学生单选平均得分5.03，主要失误的题目是6，7，12。学生普遍反映有点难，选题的时候有些犹豫，有些纠结。

完型填空难度适中，夹叙夹议，符合高考试题的特点。侧重考查学生对全文的理解，以及上下文之间的联系。我校学生失分最多的是在第23，29，34，37，其次是24，26 和38.平均得分在11分.阅读理解部分题材比较广泛，对于学生的认知词汇有比较高的要求，词汇基本定位在module5单元中出现的词汇，个别题目属于区分度很高的题目。部分阅读篇幅生词较多，但选项整体难度中等，猜测词义要求学生前后联系，注重考查学生对篇幅中已知信息的捕捉，也较好地考查了学生的逻辑推理能力。如A篇第43道题，学生的失误率就很高。阅读拿满分的学生有，拿10分的学生也有。主要原因是词汇量的大小。词汇量决定了阅读的速度，个别学生来不及就在最后俩篇阅读文章中乱蒙，所以57—65失分就特别明显。平均得分为31.39.任务型阅读有点偏难。

短文改错，我校平均得分为5.31.最大的失误点是最后一个改错，加入it.考查的是句型结构：feel it+n.to do.学生没有看出来。还有一个失误是help 改为helping，学生知道help有名词用法，但不知道本篇需要动词用法，而且还要做主语的。the改为a, serious改为seriously也存在失误。主要的原因是学生在平时的写作过程中自己也会犯同样的错误。所以很难改出文章的失误。今后短文改错在写作练习中提高。写作作为语言输出的重要部分，其重要的一项评分标准是：要运用较高级的词汇并注意句式变化。而学生的特点就是中文式思维，学生的文章就是机械性翻译，我们称之为“吐鲁番”式作文。学生时间来不及，匆匆下笔，想到什么就翻译下什么。尤其是第二段要求描写处理方式。词汇，优美句子的储存量远远不够输出。心理的因素也是导致失分的原因。平均得分为15.96.二：主要问题

1.个体差异大

我校学生文科平均分72，听力22，理科平均68，听力21。文科最高分137，最低分39（含听力）。理科最高分138.5，最低分40（含听力）。

2.单选得分低。动词的用法及词组辨析仍然是学生的弱点，很多学生词汇量达不到考试的词汇要求，英语语法知识簿弱。语言运用能力较差。尤其是省略部分。

3.阅读得分低。在阅读理解中，学生对那些需要逻辑推理、深层理解和综合分析的题目，解答有些困难。基础较簿弱的学生阅读速度达不到大纲提出的“每分钟70-80词的要求”。

最后是时间把握的问题。往往学生试题做不完，而导致学生心理考试不稳定。有些同学害怕时间不够，学生先从做阅读题开始，碰到阅读挫折了或是看了前4篇后花费时间太多，学生就慌，随意做单选和其他剩余题目。按他们的话说，就是蒙的。靠运气了。整个是在混乱紧张状况下考试。于是在书面表达中，学生存在着审题不清，遗漏内容，层次混乱，用词单调，语言组织能力不强，语句中常见错误太多，书写不认真等问题。

三：复习对策

1.因材施教

对于学生个体存在较大差异，一个班级里也有差异。我们的教学中心在于中等偏上的学生。对于在课堂上吃不饱的学生，我们采用“放养式”管理。你上课好好听，下课的作业对于懂的，可以挑着做，但是一定要做。再布置其他可以提高阅读能力的文章让他们做。让他们学会自己学习，培养自学和取舍材料的能力。对于学英语比较困难的学生，增加他们的词汇量，在模块课文复习教学过程中，让学生学会和掌握词汇。在他们身上舍得花时间，花力气狠抓词汇，运用听写、默写、翻译、造句、背诵优美词句等各种训练手段来掌握重点词汇的用法。考试说明上所提及的2500个字务必落实，每天一栏进行中文标注，听写，失误讲解。

2.单选适量

我们的突破口在于5年高考3年模拟这本练习书。每天必须布置的作业是5.3上的语法项目，规定一个语法一个专题分两天或三天完成，写出规定的页码。第二天必须检查，跟他们的平时成绩挂钩。对于学生的不重视，我们一定要督促学生写好做好5.3。

3.完型靠悟

在做完型填空的时候，先要让学生完义，整体理解最重要。学生在平时的学习中要求学生“回填法”。即把正确的答案填回到文章中，之后来朗读文章，整体理解文章。再出现问题，教师来解答。做到有的放矢。自己能解答的问题自己解答，留下时间多练习和他们自我总结。让他们多读多记，强化语言基本知识及加强基本技能的培养，特别要注重同义词，近义词的辨析，弄懂每个词的内涵与外延，确切的意义和适用的场合，同时还应具备提炼文章主题思想及依据相关信息的推断能力。

4.阅读突破

我们的突破口是每堂课前的限时训练，材料是Superstar高考阅读完型自练测，一周练3次，并及时讲解。材料的选择务必是教师做过的，最好配合模块复习的主题。其他三次，是用CCTV-9的新闻材料，也是配合主题，自编题目，基本涉及5个wh，或是自选模块题5中的一题，就划线句子讲讲你的理解。要求学生在规定的时间内读完，并回答问题。教师自己查找新闻材料，一让学生了解时事动态，也符合高考的阅读期中一篇文章可能是新闻报道类，让学生了解新闻报道类文体的特点。新闻报道的中心话题务必出现在首段。二也让选择自选的同学提供训练的机会。最后划出个别的单词让学生来记忆，增加词汇量。这样的新闻材料，学生是欢迎，是有兴趣的。这比什么都有效。

5.写作背默

每周一套试题（从天利38套中选出），试题中的作文要认真写过，上交批改，18分以上的同学给他们分数，低于18分的同学要求重新改过，改到18以上为止。这类学生至少该过两次。之后我们从中挑选好文章，再让学生修改，做短文改错一样来修改文章，最后老师定夺，把优秀的作文打印出来供全体同学背诵，第二天并默写。要求保持好文章，以便在临考前一定要复习作文，分类型背诵已经背默过的作文。这样学生在考试时一是稳定心理，二是心中有底，下笔有灵感。学生发挥就好。

我们组预计在三月底完成5.3语法复习和模块7的复习，四月份是专题训练，分单选，完型，阅读，改错，写作训练。材料由教师分任务完成，可以再次挑选5.3其中容易出错的试题，让学生温故已学的，并纠正学生错误的思维。最后就是练天利38套，精讲精练。教无定法。在离高考只有三个月的日子里，能激发学生兴趣，培养学生的听、说、读、写能力的教学方法都是有效的。

四：复习困惑

6.2024英语一模作文 篇六

一、情况分析08.3.29

50%，因此如何提升这部分考生的均分问题，是我们英语学科下一阶段应该重视的主要工作之一。

二、主要问题

2、答题技巧和规范等问题分析

1）经统计，全市因答案涂写不清楚或考生没有涂写的小题，共3073条，约3500分。2）在单项选择中，有些考生选择了两个答案。经统计总数达235小题，约350分。3）任务型阅读中，因单词大小写不分、字迹潦草看不清楚或拼写不认真，如字母r写得像v，o不关口像n等现象，被扣掉的分数较多。有些考生由于上述问题，本可以得到7分，结果只得到了3到4分，损失惨重。

4）本次网上阅卷，考生书面表达的问题最大。主要表现考生的书写不规范，太潦草，降低了文章的评分等第。经分析大多考生可能是时间不够所致（因今年较去年作文要多写30个词），另一原因是这些学生书写英语字母的基本功太差。有些考生将英文的句号写成中文的句号。在写作形式上不少考生不分段，时态语态不清，单词拼写错误太多。还有少数考生因时间不够或水平太差，在文章的开头和结尾写了两句和文章内容相符的句子，在文章的中间却抄了一大段与作文题无关的内容，企图蒙混过关，这些情况均按零分处理，如果没有中间这一段，这些文章还能得到1到5分不等。

此次考试暴露了学生很多解题策略和考试经验等方面的问题。希望在最后的复习阶段

中，我们要加强训练，不断提高。

三、复习建议

1、坚持依纲靠本，精心安排复习计划。

期末考试后，教师一定要依据《双纲》和《教材》，针对学生的实际,精心安排考前50天复习工作计划。做到计划中的时间要详细，复习内容要有针对性，措施要体现有效性。时间的安排上，建议从现在到4月中旬，以高考题型为主线，进行专题训练，也可以针对学生存在的主要问题，以教材为主线或薄弱语法知识为主线，突出重点，进行专题训练。训练可将课外训练和课内限时训练相结合，专题选练和综合训练相结合。4月中旬到5月底，进行综合训练，重点培养学生的考试经验和综合解决问题的能力。

2、优化课堂复习方法，提高课堂教学效率。

要科学地设计专题复习课和试卷讲评课的教学程序，复习中要坚持“突出重点、举一反

三、归纳总结、持精讲多练”的原则。教法上建议将阅读、任务型阅读、写作和听力这些能力训练穿插在语言知识专题训练之中，或将语言知识专题训练穿插在能力训练中，丰富课堂的教学形式和教学内容。特别要加强任务型阅读理解的专题训练。策略上要适当降低复习教学起点，保证复习效率。

3、根据高考要求，优化组合复习资料。

复习中教师要求学生练习的材料，一定贴近高考的要求，符合学生的认知水平，为了能达到这一目标，建议高三英语教师在选材上，要充分发挥集体的智慧，利用现有的复习资料，优化组合学生练习的内容，真正做到，练得精，评得准，基础一般和较差的考生，要抓好学生高考英语词汇3500词的识记工作。在识记过程中，教师要有计划、有步骤地帮助学生记忆这些单词。其次要解决好学生认真书写英文单词问题，一定要将字母写清楚。

4、加强考试做题策略研究，帮助学生积累考试经验。

每次模考时，教师要观察和计算学生每大项约耗时多少（包括70空的涂卡时间和抄写150词作文的时间），了解做题的程序和方法是否科学，分析研究做题情绪的好坏和身体状况的好差对考试影响究竟多大等等，保证学生在高考规定的时间内，先将有把握的分拿到手。

南京市教学研究室

7.茂名一模作文 篇七

四川小伙邓启明2011年硕士毕业后，担任华为海外技术部经理，虽然要常在海外工作，但待遇优厚。然而父亲去世的消息给他猛然一击，为了照顾好母亲，也为了把父亲做黄粑的技艺传承下去，他打定主意要回老家陪母亲卖黄粑。此举感动了很多人，但也引来了一些非议。有人支持他，认为“亲情是用钱买不到的”，“是金子在哪里都可干一番事业”。也有人反对，“应功成名就后接老妈去享福”，还有人认为要“尊重个人选择”。

要求：①自选角度，确定立意，自拟标题，文体不限。②不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围。3不少于800字。④不得套作，不得抄袭。

“2014年茂名市一模语文作文”浅谈

（2014年1月18日）

尽管不在高三任教，可我仍然对高三每次大考的作文题目及其评卷深感兴趣。

2014年油市一模刚刚考完，阅卷工作也已结束。前晚自修，一位在高三任教的朋友询问我对这次作文的看法，并向我陈述他所在的某重点中学高三语文科组对此的评卷指导意见。

以下是这次作文的题目：

24、阅读下面文字，根据要求作文。

四川小伙邓启明2011年硕士毕业后，担任华为海外技术部经理，虽然要常在海外工作，但待遇优厚。然而父亲去世的消息给他猛然一击，为了照顾好母亲，也为了把父亲做黄粑的技艺传承下去，他打定主意要回老家陪母亲卖黄粑。此举感动了很多人，但也引来了一些非议。有人支持他，认为“亲情是用钱买不来的”，“是金子在哪里都可干一番事业”。也有人反对，“应功成名就后接老妈去享福”，还有人认为要“尊重个人选择”。

要求：

1、自选角度，确定立意，自拟标题，文体不限。

2、不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围。

3、不少于800字。

4、不得套作，不得抄袭。

朋友说其学校高三语文科组的共识是——这则材料实质是在谈如何“行孝”，所以只有抓住“行孝”去写才是切题的。

我听了大吃一惊，脱口而呼：“可惜了，埋没了你校那么多优秀学生！这样写，必然写不出有深度的佳作来！”并断言我们的另一位语文素养涵宏的朋友一定也会为此深深惋惜。

下班回家，上网查阅，已有勤快的同行在百度文档里展示了他的两篇范文。一篇是正面立意，肯定邓启明的做法，但用的是一个中心观点加三个正面例子的写法，非常单薄，正是我与朋友们鄙视的那种“轻薄文章”。另一篇是反向立意，否定邓启明的做法，分三层论证，脉络清晰；但格局窄小，就事论事，持论又过于“自我”，实在是眼界狭浅之作。

我拨电话与那位平时多卓思创见的朋友交流。果然，他也大吃一惊，也深深惋惜。我们的观点不约而同。

这则材料作文，从“行孝”的角度来理解当然正确。但“正确”并不代表“透辟”。我与朋友都认为，“行孝”仅是材料的浅层含意，它的深层含意是对“人生价值”的思考与选择。

材料中，“但父亲去世的消息给他猛然一击”，这句话含意非常丰富。“猛然一击”的涵义应该是多重的。第一层，是对父亲去世而自己未能多尽孝心的憾恨；第二层，是对母亲孤苦伶仃而自己未能陪伴与渡的愧疚；第三层，是对父亲终生坚守、传承传统黄粑技艺（非物质文化）的感动与震撼；第四层，是由父亲的突然离去、父亲对黄粑技艺的寂寞坚守、黄粑技艺后继无人行将消亡、母儿天各一方的憾痛，而引发的对生命意义、人生价值的深沉反思与坚定抉择。

由以上分析看，邓启明的选择其实包含着极深广的人生思悟。例如，什么是“孝”，是儿女在外面赚很多钱任很大官就是孝吗？什么是“成功”，是单纯由金钱与地位的高度来衡量的吗？什么是“幸福”，是功成名就、活得风光就是幸福吗？什么是“生命意义”，是儿女事业有成、母子团聚、共享天伦就有意义吗？

那么，郑启明为什么不把母亲接到身边，然后继续在外面打拼，获取令人羡慕的丰厚待遇呢？这样，他不就既“孝”，又“成功”，又“幸福”，又“有生命意义”了吗？

可是，邓启明为什么不这样去做呢？很显然，他的抉择里，有比这些更宏大更重要更深层的追求。

我与朋友皆以为，邓启明追求的是高层次的“人生价值”。而这种追求，早由父母亲从小到大、耳濡目染传授给他——背负传承黄粑这种濒临消亡的传统美食文化的使命。这种使命感是一种“铁肩担道义”式的自我牺牲与担当。没有人要求他们这么做，但他们的内心要求自己必须这么做。这是一种义不容辞的责任，更是在世代传承中融入他们家族血液的视若生命的义务与宿命。它高于一切形式的名与利，它千钧一发式的坚守饱含着无限的悲怆与无比的崇高。它寂寞，它微弱，它孤高，它只是一点萤火，飞在那漫漫黑夜的无垠旷野里，顽强地画着它蹈舞的姿态。独行的夜者，却视它为最温煦的慰藉、最畅心的惊喜：“看，它还在！它一直都在！它还是那么美丽！”此时，便是它生命里最荣光的时刻。这，便是它最灿烂、最永恒的价值。

可惜的是，在传统工艺、传统文化日渐式微的今天，太多的人只是关注那些珠光宝气的光鲜、那些永夜璀璨的霓虹灯罢了。那暗夜里的幽光，谁会在乎？谁能理解呢？

然而纵然不被理解，他们又何尝媚俗而改变呢？他们是高山上的孤草，风侵雪摧，却依旧痴心不改，顽强活着。活着，只为触摸那峰顶上最纯最亮的天光。

他们永不改变。而世俗，包括这些重点中学的语文老师们，也不会、不能理解他们。因为，他们入世太深，却很少去作出世式的思考。所以他们是庸庸者，然后去把学生们也教成了庸庸者。

悲乎！

但邓启明也有同道吧。凤凰卫视《冷暖人生》里，曾经讲述了那些中国西部山区的代课老师，他们没有公办教师的福利，数十年领着几十元、百十元微薄工资，在那些最偏远、最艰苦、最落后、孩子对知识最渴望的地方，默默奉献，默默耗尽他们受尽世俗、权势冷眼的生命。他们如此渺小，却又如此伟大。他们的人生价值，只有他们自己知道，只有他们自己理解。一位代课近三十年、家中一贫如洗的老师，面对记者“如果可以重新选择，你是否还当代课老师”的提问，沉思片刻，毅然回答：“即使再有选择的机会，我也依然要做代课老师……看着孩子们学到知识，我感到这一生很有价值。”

呜呼！言至于此，孰能不感动涕零？而他们，竟要受世间无情的指责。如节目中一位代课老师，家中穷得全部家当价值不超过二百元，儿子上不起学，只能靠外界资助才勉强维持学业。别人批评他，他的表情就像做错事的孩子。

可是，他错了吗？

是的，他错了！他错在自觉地承担起他本不必承担的教书育人的责任！正如邓启明自觉地承担起他本不必承担的传承黄粑技艺文化的责任！可时代回馈他们的，竟是冷霜的嘴脸。诚如李敖所说：“群体是最愚昧、最自私、最冷酷的。”他们一边受着耶稣的打救，一边却冷酷地把耶稣钉在十字架上。

人世最无情！而那些面对无情依然痴心不改的人，就成了耶稣，成了圣徒。他们的价值，就在我们对他们永世的怀念里。

所以代课老师被无情地辞退了，像狗一样被一脚踢开。所以我现在写了这篇文章，去怀念他们，去礼拜他们。他们是耶稣，是圣徒，所以总是受难，所以总是受难而不悔。

而我，是一具未堕至深渊的灵魂而已。

所以，我发见了邓启明苦苦追寻与坚守的人生价值。

所以，邓启明的选择，既是为了行孝——“为了照顾好母亲”；更是为了追求人生的价值——“把父亲做黄粑的技艺传承下去”。

壮哉！

2014年油市一模作文范文（摘自百度文档）

金钱诚可贵，亲情价更高

四川硕士生邓启明能在父亲去世后放弃优裕的工作，回家陪伴母亲，引人非议。但我认为他的做法是对的，因为亲情是不能用钱买来的，亲情比金钱更重要。

现实生活中有不少人为了改变生活而在外打拼，把父母独留在家中，他们希望能功成名就，光宗耀祖。殊不知父母多么希望的陪伴，想让子多回家看看。就算有些深明大义的父母一心只想子女成功，而子女因为优厚的工作而错过照顾父母，不是会留下终身遗憾吗？需知“树欲静而风不止，子欲养而亲不待”啊！所以行孝需趁早。

更高的地位与亲情发生冲突时，我们应把亲情放在第一位，《陈情表》的作者李密就是这样一个人。他的祖母九十又六，常在床褥，他放弃被提拔为朝中高官的机会，即便“州司临门，急于星火”，都无法使他离开自己那得病的奶奶，只想在家一心一意地照顾家人。因为他知道，金钱地位可以再来，而没有自己，祖母无以终余年，在李密的心中，金钱诚可贵，亲情价更高！

良好的待遇与亲情发生冲突时，我们应把亲情放在第一位，感动中国人物陈斌强就是这样一个人。他的母亲不幸患上老年痴呆症，生活能力几乎丧失。为了方便照顾母亲，他放弃待遇较好的中学，主动申请回到离家较近的小学教书。他用绷带背着母亲上下班，在下课时可以抽空回到母亲身边逗她笑，喂她吃饭，在母亲寂寞时陪伴她，他毫不犹豫的承担起一个做儿子的责任，把母亲放在第一位，不想让母亲去缺失亲情的养老院。在陈斌强的心中，金钱诚可贵，亲情价更高！

高薪的工作与亲情发生冲突时，我们应亲情放在第一位，清华学子陈勇应是这样一个人。是四川省理科状元，曾经是清华优秀毕业生，在广州投身金融界，做起人人羡慕的高级白领。但天有不测风云，父亲不幸骨折，在家无从照顾。他果断放弃广州的高薪工作，选择回家照顾父亲，父亲的病久不见好转，他就找离家较近的一家物流公司做了一名普通保安，虽然工资不高，却能自食其力，最重要的是能常陪在父亲身边。在陈勇的心中，金钱诚可贵，亲情价更高！

让我们在人生的关键时刻做出正确的选择，不要像季羡林老人一样遗憾终生！（赞同的角度。一般议论文写法，举例与材料类似，非常准确到位。）

常回家看看

一面是待遇优厚的工作，一面父母之恩，难道真的是鱼和熊掌不可兼得吗？不！我相信，鱼和熊掌亦可兼得，工作应该继续，但亦得“常回家看看”。的确，“子欲养而亲不待”会是每个人都难以想象的痛。但是，邓启明为了把父亲做黄粑的技艺传承下去而辞去待遇优厚的工作，这种做法在我看来显然是极其不理智的行为。首先，这样的选择真的是父母的愿望吗？于一位农民而言，培育出一个硕士生需要付出多大的金钱和精力啊！父母的目的无他，肯定是希望儿子出人头地，找到一份好工作，过上安稳的生活，天下父母的心都是一样的。放弃了这样优厚待遇的工作回乡做黄粑，母亲脸上无光，心里岂能痛快？邓启明，你确定这样就是孝了吗？这就是你父亲培养出一个硕士研究生的目的吗？这就是寒窗苦读十余载之后应该走的路吗？

其次，丢弃自己的专长，选择自己的弱项重新开始，是不明智的。专业有专攻，一个硕士毕业生，饭读读书，学有所成，学有所用。却要放弃自己的专长，去做自己所不懂的黄粑，即使妈妈可能会教会他做，但一个硕士去做一种没有一点技术含量的工作，也是大材小用，造成人才的极大浪费，是极不明智的。

最后，今天，随着科技发展的日新月异，我们随时可以与父母在电话上视频、交谈，即便是身处异国的你，不是也能和母亲畅谈来排解她的孤独吗？随着高速公路、铁路、飞机的飞速发展，各种交通工具速度越来越快，昨天，你还在公司电脑上敲击，或许今天你已然在家与母亲话家长里短了。父母的爱是伟大而无私的，他们不需要我们回报太多，只要你记得常打打电话，告诉父母你的近况；记得常回家看看，让父母知道你确实过得很好；有空的时候，陪父母到街上走一走，这就足够了。一个高素质的硕士应该有两全的理智和妥善地解决问题的方法。

坚持自己的优厚工作，为自己的亲人赚取一定的物质基础；不忘父母之恩，常回家看看。工作与孝道两不忘。北京大学校长是称职的校长，每到母亲大寿也会抽出时间回家，向母亲下跪，给母亲洗脚。自豪的母亲活到九十还身体倍儿棒。这样工作和尽孝两不误的人才是人中龙凤，让人敬佩！

两利相权取其重，有了更好的物质生活才能更好地行孝。处事稳重，不让父母担心的儿女才是真正孝顺的好儿女，我们又何必放弃优厚待遇呢，父母只须你常回家看看。

（反对的角度。列举理由式时评，合乎人情，发乎真情，是一篇有思想的佳作！）

人生路上，责任作伴（56分）

小伙子弃优厚待遇赴老家人传承父母技艺，这是对父母最沉也最真的责任。众说纷纭，而我认为，人生路上，有责任作伴，且歌且舞。

责任之于家人，是一生不变的承诺与守护。“子欲养而亲不待，树欲静而风不止”.虽然，很多事情都逃避不了责任，也大可不必逃避。有没有曾经想起过：很多时候，你认为一天这样过来又过去了，明天也一定还会到来，能见的人明天也一定会见到，但是就在你一转身一放手的一刹那，可能有些人就和你永远地离别了。没有谁约定会一辈子留在你身边。很多事情不能等到失去后才明白，等到不再年轻时才懂得如果这样，只会换取白了少年头的空悲切。邓启明在父亲去世后意识到家人的重要性，海外职工千千万万又不差他一个，赴家承艺，尽孝要趁早的他再也停不下回家的脚步，将责任换成行动。相信他这一辈子也不会为这一决定后悔，因为责任之花已在他心头盛开。

责任的兑现，要在合适的时间，责任是如此的美丽，如同一园勃勃生机，引来鸟鸣花开；如同一汪清泉，造就泉香酒洌；又如一缕阳光，换取万物复苏。但是，这个电动机要恰当，迟到的到来不可行。在冬日造一片假园换不来鸟语花香，在冰封雪飘的日子里酿不成清泉美酒，在荒凉冬季也无法造就万物复苏„„可见，时机是如此的重要。小伙子事业如日中天，家里境况同时也紧急万分，似乎不是抛下好事业的好时机。但是正如有些人所说“应功成名就后接老妈云享福。”试问，有多少妈妈是认为物质才是幸福的，在老家的妈妈眼坦克，与子相依，终日作伴才是一生最 大的企盼。不必等到功成名就，不必顾此失彼，现在背起包袱，迈上回家的路上的路途，与责任作伴，切勿让兑现的时间推迟。

最真最美的约定坚守，并且持之不懈。责任之花永不凋谢。也许有人会发问，会不会有一天小伙子耐不住老家的寂寞而重归海外奋斗？我想，不会的。这责任已在他心中植根，热爱并坚定追求，他会在老家有一番属于他父亲也是他自己的事业。这履行，不必上刀山下油锅，也不必头悬梁锥刺股，只需每天一点一滴地积累，以坚持的力量云浇灌责任之花，相信，当责任之花盛放于中国人每人的心头之时，社会悲剧就少了，文明之风便多了。范文2

以爱之名，传承大爱（53分）

邓启明在父亲去世后，为照顾好母亲，传承父亲的黄粑技艺，辞去待遇优厚的工作。此举体现了他重视父母养育之恩的报答，也向世人表明了心迹：亲情无法用钱来衡量和替代的。

“树欲静而风不止，子欲养而亲不待。”邓启明的父亲去世后意识到，即使有再多的金钱去安抚老人晚年孤寂的心，也是于是无补的。毕竟人已去，纵使我们有心有力，但却无法弥补失去之痛。趁着还有时间和机会，便真心对待我们要珍惜和报恩的人。年华逝去，无人可以跨越时光之轴，回到从前，拾起一颗颗遗憾和懊悔的金子。英国前首相撒切尔夫人穷尽一生捍卫英国的利益与主权。但却忽视了自己的家庭。但是，亲情之痛是无法弥补的，即使她权倾一生，给予家庭再多的荣誉和财富，但是她的家族始终感受不到爱和温情。这样的亲情仅靠出生时的血缘纽带和冷冰冰的地位和荣誉是无法维持的。晚年的她，曾落寞道：“我站在高位上，却体会不到家的温暖，若可以选择，我宁愿一开始就选择我的家庭。”家庭是伟大首相撒切尔夫人的遗憾，而邓启明却聪明地预料到这一点，及早从金钱中抽身，回到家里报养母亲的养育之恩。金钱可以买到很多东西，但金钱不可以买到亲情。

邓启明从金钱泥淖中抽身，既慰藉母亲受伤孤独的心灵，又向世人宣扬着亲情为上，纵然生命周遭的风景再华美，也要适时停下，常常回家看看，中华民族是一个注重传统的民族。其注重孝为先的精神品格源远流长。但在如今现代文明的冲击碰撞之下，孝心成为了年轻人略显缺乏的一面，社会上赶父母出家的事比比皆是。街头那穿着破旧衣裳的老人拾荒的场面是如今金钱主义、冷漠人性的写照。因此，国务院也出台文件号召出外打工的人要常回家看看，而邓启明今日之为正是应了国情之说。号召着众人要重视亲情，莫等回头时，才发现所爱之人已不在。