雅思小作文范文

雅思小作文范文（精选11篇）

1.雅思小作文范文 篇一

for the sake of… 为了…起见

at first sight乍一看，初看起来

in spite of… 不管…，不顾…

in terms of… 依据…，按照…

on the second thoughts经重新考虑，一转念

from time to time有时，不时

in truth事实上，实际上，的确

on the whole总的来说

take...into account把…加以考虑

gain/have an advantage over…胜过…，优于…

take advantage of…利用…，趁…之机

make the best of…充分利用…，妥善处理…

take charge of…担任…，负责…

make a/the difference有影响，很重要

carry/bring into effect 使生效，使起作用

put into effect实行，生效

come/go into effect生效，实施

keep an eye on…留意…，照看…

bear/keep in mind记住

make up one’s mind下决心

keep/hold pace with… 跟上…，与…同步

take place发生，进行

take the place of… 代替…

make sense 讲得通，有意义

a great/good deal of大量(修饰不可数名词)

influence on影响

reply to…回答…，答复…

once upon a time从前

once in a while偶尔，有时

account for…说明…

2.雅思小作文范文 篇二

Dear Ms Barnes，

I am writing concerning （关于） the position of Assistant Office Manager that I am due to begin （应该接任） next Monday. I am afraid to inform you that a problem has arisen.

As you know， I currently work for my uncle's food-packing business， and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience there.

Unfortunately， he has had to go into hospital for an operation， leaving my aunt in charge of （负责） both the home and the business. She has asked me， as this is a particularly busy time of year， to stay on and help her with the running of the office.

I realise this will be inconvenient to you， but very much hope that， given the circumstances （鉴于这种情况）， you would be prepared to allow me to take up （开始从事） my position with you two weeks later than planned.

I would like to emphasise that I remain very keen （渴望的） to work with you， and that I will be gaining further useful experience during this time.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely，

John Forbes

【分析】通过分析上面这篇雅思范文的结构，我们可以看出写道歉信的主要思路：总述—陈述原因—提出措施—结尾。由于这封信是写给未来雇主的，因此文体相对来说比较正式。在第一段的总述中，范文使用了句型I am writing concerning ...开门见山地说明写信的缘由，其中的concerning为介词，表示“关于”，相当于about。后面定语从句中的due to do sth.在此表示“应该做某事”。紧接着范文用I am afraid to inform you that表示转折，说明下周一无法按时接任助理一职。第二、三段开始陈述原因。范文用了unfortunately来衔接这两段，紧接着又用了现在分词短语leaving my aunt in charge of both the home and the business和as引导的原因状语从句来说明客观情况，同时也表明自己这么做也是情势所迫。第四段提出措施，作者用了very much hope that和较为正式的虚拟语气you would be prepared to来表示自己的诚恳态度。除了这个句型外，我们还可以用表示委婉和礼貌的句型could you please ...或I wonder if ...来表示请求。为了表示自己对这份工作的渴望和对未来雇主的歉意，范文第五段再次表示了自己的态度和诚意。最后作者用了期待对方回信最常用的句型I look forward to ...来结尾。通篇思路清晰，一气呵成。

【高考真题】（2014年高考英语北京卷书面表达）

你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1. 你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2. 由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

注意：1. 词数不少于50。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【分析】通过审题，我们看到文中有“由于……无法……”“表达你的歉意”等字眼，因此可判断要写的是一封道歉信，可以尝试利用上面范文的写作思路。

总述：开头段我们可以使用上面范文中的“I am writing concerning/about ...”。根据内容要点1和2可知，写信的内容是自己本计划在7月和朋友一起去云南旅游，结果由于扭伤脚踝，现在无法按原计划去了。此处可以借鉴雅思范文，先用I am afraid to inform you that引出问题，紧接着再简单介绍一下原因。

陈述原因：接下来可以具体陈述原因，比如“原以为自己能很快康复（recover），但是不得不去医院做手术”。我们可以借用范文里的分词短语，比如“自己的缺席造成没人负责朋友的旅游”就可以表达为leaving nobody in charge of your trip。

提出措施：根据内容要点3可知，措施就是“将旅行推迟到8月份”，此时可以用范文里比较委婉和诚恳的句型“I realise that this will be inconvenient for you， but very much hope that， given the circumstances， you would be prepared to ...”，也可以用I wonder if ...等相对简单的句型。范文第五段进一步表明了自己的态度，有能力的同学也可以发挥想象，比如“我非常希望和你一起去云南，届时我一定会为你安排一趟舒适的旅行”。

结尾：最后可以再次表示歉意，同时期待对方的答复。

【成品】

Dear Chris，

I am writing concerning the visit to Yunnan that we are due to begin in July. I am afraid to inform you that a problem has arisen. I had an accident and fell and sprained my ankle.

At first， I thought I would recover quickly if I just stayed at home. However， I have had to go into hospital for an operation， leaving nobody in charge of your trip.

I realise that this will be inconvenient for you， but very much hope that， given the circumstances， you would be prepared to allow me to go to Yunnan with you four weeks later than planned.

Please accept my apology for the delay and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely，

Joe

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am organizing a trip for a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. I am writing this letter to enquire （询问） about the following. First of all， what is the size of the exhibition， what is its theme and what objects are on display （参展物品）？ Secondly， when will the exhibition be held and what are the daily opening hours （每日的营业时间）？

I must point out that I hope to bring some students over （说服） to the exhibition， so I would like to enquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets （入场券） for students. I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully，

Li Ming

【分析】上面这篇范文是一篇典型的咨询信。咨询信的写作基本思路是：表明写信缘由—概括咨询内容—展开咨询事项—结尾。首先需要写清个人的基本情况，即“我”正在进行某项活动，在这项活动中产生了咨询的需要。接着需要对咨询的内容进行概括，范文中用到的句型I am writing this letter to enquire about ...比较常用，大家可以积累下来。接下来详细说明咨询的事项，如果不止一条，需要用firstly、secondly等表示次序的词标记清楚。在范文中，由what和when引导的五个疑问句分别对规模、主题、参展物品、参展日期和营业时间等要素进行了提问。如果需要对某方面进行强调，则可以另起一段，如范文中用point out表示强调，同时与文章首句相互呼应。之后范文使用了I would like to enquire if ...句型，对打折情况进行询问。结尾对咨询结果表示期待，给人以行文圆满之感。

【高考真题】（2014年高考英语新课标I卷书面表达）

假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。

注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇：住宿—accommodation

【分析】首先，题目要求里有“询问有关情况”，可知要写的是一封咨询信，可以尝试利用上面范文的写作思路。

表明写信缘由：暑假期间计划去英国学习为期六周的英语课程，需要咨询一下课程。

概括咨询内容：此处可以直接借鉴范文的常用句型。

展开咨询事项：通过分析可知，真题和范文的相同之处在于二者都涉及了size、date、daily hours，所以我们在写作时可以参考范文中的五个疑问句句式。需要注意的是，我们需将daily opening hours改为daily learning hours，虽然题目要求问的是每周的课时数（how many hours of learning per week），但每天的课时数与每周课时数可以换算，而且形式上更加简练。最后的type of accommodation，我们可以发挥想象，比如最便宜的宿舍。此外，大家如果想强调某方面或某几方面，可以套用范文里的I should point out that I hope to ...句型。比如想强调住宿费用要尽可能低，就可以说成：I should point out that I hope to spend as little as possible on accommodation. 句中除了使用了spend ... on ...的结构，还使用了as ... as结构，使行文更加生动，同时避免落入使用the cheapest的俗套。

结尾：借鉴范文中期待回信的经典句型结尾即可。

【成品】

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am planning to attend a six-week English training course in Britain this summer. I am writing this letter to enquire about the following.

First of all， what is the size of the class？ Secondly， what are the start dates of the courses and what are the daily learning hours？ What about the fees？

I should point out that I hope to spend as little as possible on accommodation， so I would like to enquire if there is any discount available and what the requirements are.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

由此可见，雅思应用文的范文是我们备考高考应用文很有用的学习材料。限于篇幅，其他类型的应用文就不再一一赘述。同学们可以多找些范文，从中学习各类应用文的写作思路，同时积累其中的精彩表达并活学活用，相信一定可以轻松攻克高考英语应用文。

作者简介：

3.雅思小作文 篇三

范文：

some worldwide sports competitions could improve the comprehensive state power. However, other as opponents claim that to spend money on children to take part in sports activities would be better than support these competitors. To a certain extent, I agree with these opponents, with some reservations. I aim at discussing both side of the issue and put up my opinion.

On the one hand, it has well accepted that participating in more sports activities could improve the health of children. However, nowadays, most of young generation locks physical excises and are reluctant to take part in sports. Accordingly, every country should implement pohueg to encourage and support children sports activities. For example, the government can build more sports fwl,t,eg fitting for children or set up scholarship for these positive young sport participants. Consequently, when the government could spend more and more money on the children sports activities, the more benefits under the policies would address to children.

On the other hand, spending a huge amount of money on supporting these professional competitors would encourage young children to take part in the sports. First of all, if a country has a huge expenditure on world wild professional competitions, this would directly encourage young children to be interested in sports and hope to be a professional sportsman. Besides, young people would be encouraged to take part in the sports activities, when they can find that has been supported by their country. Thus, under a certain extent, I agree with these advocates to spend money on these professional sportsmen, however the range of supporting should be controlled.

4.雅思小作文范文 篇四

雅思学术类大作文结尾高端写法

一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的，尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的，但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中，朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。

一.回顾全文+观点+展望：

这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文，在这种写法中，我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成，其中第2个要素是必须的，但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子：

I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering.However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.上面这个例句中，作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子：

In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline.However, it should be the last choice for parents.If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.大家不难发现，2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式，即首句委婉地回顾全文，将观点的对立面用“让步”的方式表达出来，同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为，这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的，加上对于未来的润色，使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法，我们再来看第三个例句：

To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.和前2个结尾不同，第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文，但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造“展望未来”时的一个

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思路，即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局，比如：

All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society.The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.对于毒品对社会的危害，作者先是承认现状的无法改变，进而乐观地阐述了自己的观点即采取了切实有效的行动后可以减弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性来对未来作展望。换句话说，在社会类分析解决型议论文中，我们在展望未来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为突破口。又如：

In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school.However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country’s people are to achieve their full potential.这个结尾的题目是讨论辍学这一社会现象导致的问题和解决方案的。我们发现使用前面提到的条件状语从句也可以作为这类题材结尾的重要句型。

二.观点+展望：

第2种结尾的思路即将回顾全文部分省略，直接表达观点和意图。这种结尾方式比较适合于纯单边支持的作文，以下我们来看几个例子：

It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it.But attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.关于人才流失的话题，作者在结尾一上来就表达了自己的立场，即无法阻止这个现象。但是进而又对改变这个状况做了期待。我们来对比另外一个例子：

All in all, the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone.Nations need to work together on long-term projects, sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.在分析解决型题材的结尾中我们也可以采用这种2要素的结尾方式，如果最后所剩时间不是很充分的前提下，省略对全文的回顾而直接表达观点也是一种明智的决定。

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上面例子中，我们发现，其实展望未来这个部分，也可以写成解释原因，因为不是每个题目到最后都能想出一个合适的未来让你展望的，那么这个时候我们不妨把思路切换成对观点的原因解释，也未尝不是一个好主意。我们再来看看这个例子：

To sum up, the richer nations have helped a lot by providing money for poor countries and poorer countries need to not only spend the money for daily use, but also put more money on economic developments, human resource improvements and education advancements, because only by doing so can they change their poor situations.以上是对2种高端结尾方式的探讨。

5.雅思小作文写作方法 篇五

The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 20xx. Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km to around 3,000 km in the year 20xx.

文章的主句应该对文章要表达的趋势，量的.大小作出说明，相关的数据则补充在后面。雅思小作文考察的精髓还是查看考生的英文表达能力，精简凝练。你的描述要让阅卷者脑海中浮现出图形的样本，数量和趋势等等相关变量。如果你能达到以上这些要求，那么小作文本身也就基本上合格了。

二、了解图形的分类规律

图形描述题，按照标准图形来分，可以分为line graph (curve), bar chart, pie chart以及table，按照表达重点来分，分为趋势类和大小类，分类依据于题中的时间列表。一般来说，出现时间段的图形题都是以描述数据变化趋势为主。

三、准备必要的表达方式

1. 与趋势有关的词语：

上升(动词)：increase, rise, climb, ascend, surge, shoot up

下降(动词)：decrease, decline, drop, fall, descend, plunge

持平(动词)：remain stable, keep constant, level off, flatten out

波动(动词)：fluctuate, wave, go up and down

快速(形容词/副词)：considerable/considerably, significant/significantly,substantial/substantially,remarkable/remarkably, dramatic/dramatically

稳步(形容词/副词)：steady/steadily, stable/stably, moderate/moderately, modest/modestly

缓慢(形容词/副词)：slight/slightly, minimal/minimally, marginal/marginally

顶点(名词 /动词)：peak

趋势 (名词)：trend/ tendency

2. 与大小相关的词语：

Outnumber (动词)：在数量上超过The demonstrators were outnumbered by the police

Exceed (动词)：在数量上超过

Triple (动词)：变成三倍The figure has tripled.

Double (动词)：变成两倍The price of houses has virtually doubled over the past few years.

Mount to (动词)：达到

Counterpart (名词)：对应的另一方，比较的另一方 this product is better than its counterparts

此外，建议考生还应考虑一下题中数据和百分比有没有联系，如果有的话还应添加一些数据所占百分比的语句。

3. 相关词语：

百分比(名词)：proportion, rate, percentage, share

占据 (动词)：occupy, prise, constitute, account for, represent.

数字：number, amount, data, figure

比例：rate, proportion, percentage, share

大约：roughly, about, nearly, approximately, a little less than, slightly more than

各自地：respectively, for each，severally

四、注重连词的使用

连词在语句中起着承上启下的作用，添加连词，可以增加文章的逻辑感，使得文章更加严谨，同时，文章中连词的使用也要讲究一定的形式，我们在文章中一般称之为形连。

五、Integrity and Perfection

文章有了恰当的表达方式，还需要进行一些细节方面的修饰，添加数据时，形式要整齐划一，有不随便删除和添加数量单位，增加连词的使用，加强文章的严谨度，采用一些多样化的数据添加方式，是文章看起来有理有据，中心思想贯穿全文。

主要数据添加方式有：

1. 利用标点，如括号和破折号

2. 利用介词，如with, at, to, by等

6.你误解了雅思小作文 篇六

7writing精品雅思作文批改

NO.1小作文的评分标准

很多同学认为雅思小作文就是抄数据，用套用句。其实错了，只有正确了解到雅思小作文的评分标准后才能有效的写出高分作文。真正的评分标准第一点就是Task Achievement(任务完成)，第二点是Coherence and Cohesion(连贯与衔接)，第三点是Lexical Resource(词汇资源)，第四点是Grammatical Range and Accuracy(语法范围与精确)。只有各项写作满足要求才会有高分出现

NO.2小作文占用时间太多

雅思考官官方提出TASK2 carries more weight（大作文占更多分值），足以看出其重要性，而考生在考试中往往控制不住时间，认为小作文相对来说比较好些，一股脑用了半个小时写出了一篇极为漂亮小作文，结果大作文没时间写，最后迎接你的还是那冷冰冰的4分。所以，建议小作文时间不要超过20分钟，字数不要超过180。从而给大作文留出至少40分钟的写作时间。

NO.3小作文写作中画蛇添足

这是中国学生的习惯性毛病，写作文时候总喜欢写上为什么。雅思小作文是客观性写作，只要求通过图表描述和总结，不能写上为什么，不需要解释。参照剑5test1中曲线图，日本在2030年左右65岁人口数量预计要陡增，但我们只要求写出事实，不要求写出陡增的原因！

NO.4写作中忽略数据的支持

剑7TEST1后面给出了一篇5.5分的范文评语中说到，There is no clear reference to what the percentage represent.再回头看看范文，基本没出现每个部分的数据支持，只是一味的在描述上升和下降等趋势。看完给人完全雾里的感觉。小作文的要求实际上就是让人能在没有图表的情况下能通过你的作文了解到图表的状态。

NO.5图表解读不够充分

很多同学因为上文提到过的时间占用的问题，在考试中为了争取足够的大作文时间，小作文部分题目都还没看透就开始提笔写。剑6TEST2中范文就是很好的例子，作者整篇文章都没有意识到题目和表格中所给出的数据是建立在Average distance in miles上面，却当成了数据是建立在人数上。这是一个很低级的错误。建议在拿到题目后用一分钟左右充分解读图表中的所有图例并理解。

NO.6时态及单词拼写问题

考生在不了解情况的前提下很容易出现文章时态混用的情况。原则上除了文章第一句用一般现在时来介绍图表，后面句子都用一般过去时。除非是剑5test1中曲线图，2009年以后的人口增长预测中，我们一般在图表作文中出现对将来预测时候用一般现在时。从雅思官方的评分标准上看，单词拼写允许有些许的错误。但原则上是不允许美英和英英混用的情况。

NO.7词汇重复使用

由于对词汇的掌握不够，一些上升下降等核心词汇出现一再重复。从评分标准第三点Lexical Resource(词汇资源)来看，这是影响最后得分高低的一个重要因素。在剑7TEST1得5.5分那篇文章的评语中提到:the words have quite a lot of repetition。范文中连续用到7次相同的consumer这个词。

NO.8连接词使用不当

在评分标准第二点中明确提到了Coherence and Cohesion(连贯与衔接)，可见是一个相当重要的得分参考点。而很多中国学生的作文中充满了then, after, before等这样单调的低级连接词，最后的得分自然不会上去。合理的使用一些从句，关联词会使你的句子看起来更加精炼和有创意。

NO.9趋势描写的重复及不当

同学们在描写趋势的上升或下降的时候常常只用到了一个increase&decrease+ADV 的模式。殊不知对上升下降的描写我们可以采取至少三种的描写方式动词+副词，形容词+名词以及把上升下降的词换做形容词来使用。这也就正好避免了评分标准四Grammatical Range and Accuracy(语法范围与精确)中的陷阱。

NO.10句式选用过于单调

放眼望去，满篇文章都在采用there be的句型描写图表趋势，过于单一！以曲线图为例，我们何不采用全方位立体式的句式去描写呢？横纵坐标都可用来做主语，时间地点也可用来做主语，甚至描述对象都可用来做主语，这样延伸开来，你的句式是不是就显得丰富得多了呢？

NO.11respectively的使用

此词的本意是“分别的”。在遇到两种或多种属性的不同数据时候，若不用此词的话会使你的句子显得臃肿复杂。例如：The average house prices increased slightly in Madrid and Frankfurt by about 1.5percent and 2percent respectively.试想如果不用respectively而改用一次的单独描写，这个句子是不是就没这么精辟和精炼了呢？

NO.12分段错误

关于information的organizing 和paragraphing也是一个很重要的得分参照点。剑4TEST3中是一张技工，本科，学士，研究生，硕士以及博士的男女数量分布图。很多同学在中间描述段的时候将其按照学位的排列顺序分成了六段来写，这又让你的内容变得复杂和臃肿了！为

何不按照性别来分段呢？只需要两段就可以将图表内容梳理清楚。所以建议大家在动笔之前首先在自己的头脑中有一个最为清晰和直观明了的分段。

NO.13大小作文谁先写的问题

7.托福雅思写作小作文 篇七

As can be seen from the two pie chart, males account for a much higher rate in terms of the total arrests being made, While females show a higher proportion than males with arrests for public drinking, assault, and some unknown reasons, males get arrested more often than females in other respects.

As far as public drinking is concerned, the rate of arrests with women is 6% higher than that with men which is 31% versus 37%. A similar situation goes to assault and the “no answer” category which is 18% vs. 16% and 7% vs. 4% respectively.

Otherwise, men reveal an unexceptional higher proportion than women and among these, men who got arrested for drunken driving, breach of order and theft all compare strongly with women.

8.雅思写作小作文真题 篇八

Initially, Americans ranked the top, with an average height of approximately 168 cm which was immediately followed by British (166cm) while people from Denmark and France were slightly higher than 160 cm.

Over the following seven and a half decades, in spite of some minor ups and downs, the average heights had almost remained unchanged in all the countries except France where people’s height kept rising in the latter half of the period. This exceeded that of the Danish in around 1850.

After that, the trend in the USA and the UK showed great similarity though at a slightly different rate. They saw an ongoing rise until 1975, when the height equaled to approximately 180 cm. The Danish grew considerably and became the tallest at almost 190 cm, standing in remarkable contrast with French who were merely 173 cm.

In short, while Americans and the British were equally high in the end, the gap between Danes and Frenchmen had widened.

雅思大作文7分范文：城市化问题

题目是：Some people think traffic and housing problems in large cities can be solved by moving companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

雅思大作文审题

本题的核心问题是：城市的交通和住房压力很大，于是政府鼓励企业搬迁到农村地区去，此举是好还是坏?我们的惯性思维当然是：此举甚好!因为企业一旦搬出城市，不仅空气好了，交通和住房压力都会大大地降低，同时还会带动农村当地的经济和发展。这些都是很有道理的，但是，大家可能没有想到，当企业搬到农村地区后，很多原来住在城市的工作人员就得往返于农村与城市之间，同时，企业若到农村地区，产品运输也会遇到更多问题。因此，如果政府鼓励企业搬往农村，就应该建立相应的配套基础设施，这样才能既降低城市交通住房压力，同时又保证企业正常经营。

从本期开始，老雅将结合每周考试真题，给大家谈如何在写作中实现“批判性思维”(critical thinking)。首先想申明的是，所谓批判性思维并不高深，简单地说就是我们日常生活里常说的“一分为二地看问题”。大家都同意或都反对的观点，我可以从不同角度、不同层次看出这个观点的合理和不合理之处，也就是比别人看得更深、更细、更全面，做到这一点，就可以说你具有了基本的批判思维能力。

9.雅思小作文十个细节 篇九

雅思小作文十个细节

导学：一般说到雅思小作文，很多考生会不约而同地想到词汇和语法的确，在雅思小作文的四项评分标准中，这两项指标占据了半壁江山！其实雅思小作文还有十个细节是需要注意的。对于前者，考生们往往不敢怠慢，备考过程中的很大一部分时间和精力都是花在词汇积累上的，而对于后者，却因为单调、枯燥而常常被有意无意地忽视。实际上，“磨刀不误砍柴工”，只有把“语法”这把刀磨得亮亮的，才有可能连词成句，连句成段，又快又好地完成雅思小作文写作任务。

今天小编为大家整理了关于雅思小作文备考计划十个细节！

1.熟练掌握小作文三大段框架，即开头介绍段，中间描述段和结尾总结段，这会让你的文

章看起来更具有条理和整洁。

2.尽量把字迹写工整，虽然字迹工整与否并不是评分标准范畴里的，但若你的英文写成了

狂草书，考官也是会抓狂的！

3.雅思小作文不需要用太过于复杂的句式，能避免使用定语从句就不用，记住一句话：用

最精辟的语言表达出最完整的信息！

4.在小作文中放入插入语，伴随状语等形式能让你的文章更显精辟！

5.小作文是客观性作文，所以你的文章中只能使用客观用词，不能出现because等主观性

解释性的语句。

6.雅思小作文写作最好有明确是时间分配，即准备阶段3分钟，写作阶段15分钟。严格

遵循18分钟完成小作文的要求。绝对不能抢大作文的风头！

7.单词重复属于小作文写作中的大忌！在精辟的同时请选用多样化的词汇彰显你的学术范

儿。

8.大作文所占分值更多，所以若遇大作文比较难写，先干掉大作文！

9.不要用一般现在时贯穿首尾，一般情况下雅思小作文主要时态为过去时。此外，将来时

不会出现在小作文中！

10.老外非常注重英文写作时候的逻辑，所以在你的小作文里请分段清楚，那最能体现你清

晰的逻辑思路。

10.雅思柱状图小作文写作 篇十

思路解析：

1. 分段原则为：上升的一段，下降的一段，波动的一段。

2. 采用折现模式，重点描述数据的改变和趋势。

3. 注意一类数据的描述(Max, Min, 最大的改变等等)。

参考范文：

The bar chart shows the changing patterns of transport use in a European city during the period from 1960 to 2000. In brief, the chart shows that the use of the car as a means of transport dramatically increased over the period shown, while the others fell.

In detail, in 1960 the motor car was used least as a method of transport with only about 7% of the population using this method but car use grew steadily and strongly to finally reach about 37% of the population by 2000. This was a massive 5-fold increase in use.

Over this same period, however, the popularity of walking, which had been the most popular means of transport with 35% of the population in 1960 having it as their preferred way of getting around, fell to 10%. Bicycle use also fell from a high of about 27% in 1960 to just 7% in 2000.

On the other hand, bus use was more erratic being popular with almost 20% of the population in 1960 and rising to a peak of about 27% in 1980 before falling back to about 18% in 2000.

11.雅思图表小作文分析 篇十一

2.4月21日The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

3.2016年9月15日More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?

当然，大家要记住，刷题的目的不是为了大家背诵文章，而是通过常用的真题进行话题词汇的累积和观点方面的头脑风暴。毕竟考试的时候你不能把背诵的内容直接写进去，但是你留在脑海里的话题单词和观点，确实实实在在给你增加分数的砝码，最后希望各位考生多刷题，多思考，勤动笔，少背诵

最好的雅思写作开头段写法 必出自这5类

雅思写作开头段的构成

那我们研究开头段，第一个问题就是开头段是由什么组成的。开头段可以说是对于题目的一个最直接的回应，因此，一个开头段的组成基本是和题目的构成紧密相关的。而雅思大作文的题目构成主要分成两类，一类是和观点有关的题目，比方说“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”或者是“discuss both views and give your own opinion.” 这类题目的构成往往为“背景+题目观点+题目问题”。另一类是和事实有关的题目，比方说“do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?”或者是“what are the reasons and how to solve these issues?” 而这一类的题目中就只有“背景事实+题目问题”。

所以， 我们的较为标准的开头段通常便是“背景引入+题目观点复述+己方观点表达”或是，“背景引入+己方问题回应”。

因此我们在本篇先说一说开头段中的背景引入的方式。这个部分我认为应该是整个开头段从语言角度讲最重要的部分，最需要同学们的注意。

一方面因为，学生往往会用较为随便或千篇 一律的描述一笔带过，比方是“Nowadays, with the development of...”这样的老套话术，会给考官模板的感觉，也让考官对文章一开始就失去兴趣。另一个需要重视这一部分的重要原因是，这部分灵活度很强，也就是能更好的展现自己的英语实力。

所以，比起简单的同意替换，我们可以把背景引入分为五大类：

雅思写作开头段写法1 摆事实

也就是通过对题目主题的理解，写一句对事实的描述，从而引出题目的话题或是问题。

例：1. Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?(Collins Unit1)

There have always been differences in the types of work men and women have done...

2. Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit2)

The increasing availability of convenience foods has been a significant feature of modern life in many developed countries...

3. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? (C4T4)

Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

4. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. (C5T2)

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

雅思写作开头段写法2 给原因

也就是根据题目中的观点或是题目中的事实去向前推出一层原因，从而让开头更有逻辑。

例：1. As language such as English, Spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? (Collins Unit5)

As the world becomes more integrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing.

2. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C6T2)

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.

雅思写作开头段写法3 给结果

通过对于结果的描述，向上推出题目论证的内容。这个方法思路较绕，但是用恰当也算是另辟蹊径。

例：1. In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays they change their job frequently. Please give your reasons and suggestions.

Though the experience of moving from one job to another can sometimes be distressing or even traumatic, thousands of employees move from one job to another in rapid succession every year.

2. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today`s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What`s your opinion.

It will be good news for school children when they are told that foreign language is no longer a required subject because translation can all be down by machines. ……

雅思写作开头段写法4 时间对比

这样的开头做法通常是将古今进行对比，从而引出题目的争论，或是主题。

例：1. Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can social benefit from the contribution that older people can make?(Collins Unit9)

People today can expect to live a longer and healthier life than people in the past. …….(现在的人与过去相比预期活得更长，更健康。)

2. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit10)

In the past, news about famous people may have been confined to gossip columns in newspapers; these days it is not uncommon for celebrities to feature as front page news.

3. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (C9T1)

Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.

雅思写作开头段写法5 地点对比

例：Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (C8GB)