雅思8分学习经验

雅思8分学习经验（共7篇）（共7篇）

1.雅思8分学习经验 篇一

雅思首考8分，我只用了一个半月的时间

考任何试，真题都是最最权威和最最高效的复习材料。

我是这句话坚定的推崇者。从小到大，经历过无数考试的洗礼，无数次的经验教训无不验证了这句话的价值。而雅思的真题，就是每个应试者都会人手一套的剑桥雅思真题。看上去不过薄薄四本练习册，区区十六套练习题，但它的价值却是市面上任何其他参考书不能望其项背的。关于剑桥雅思怎么用，我个人的实践是这样的：首先，一定要怀着非常认真和珍惜的心情对待珍贵的真题。充分研究每一个知识点。

//听力//

关于听力部分，我的做法是先精听，踏踏实实当自己在考试，做一遍题。然后查缺补漏之后，就做听写。听写可能是一项很让人厌烦的工作，就连我自己也不过做了五六个section的听写之后就半途而废了。我的替代方法是在心里默想，就是把写在纸上的过程放在心里。然后再对照原文，把听力原文都学会了，听不懂的部分和听错的部分，甚至可以学习其中好的习语和叙述方式。

//阅读//

至于阅读，不管任何老师向我传述任何神乎其神的方法，我始终坚信一点：看得懂，才做的对。理解了，自然能做出题来。我不相信任何所谓不读文章就能做对题的方法。那绝对不是提高阅读水平的长久之计，在实践过程中也往往导致分数上的失误。我的四六级阅读满分都是遵循这个黄金定理。真正要下功夫的，无非就在阅读的速度上。而这一点的提高，也是要靠精读真题来达到。

开始阅读，我没有强调阅读的速度，也没有定时间，遇到不懂的词，就先用铅笔标记，然后通读完整篇。之后，再对标记的生词和不理解的搭配进行查询。其实，我渐渐发现，很多不认识的词根本不会影响到对文章有效内容的把握。但是，查过之后再读一遍，语感会有很大的提高。听力和阅读，真的是一日曝，十日寒。

//写作//

至于写作，由于分数不算高，也谈不上有什么经验，我考试前就精读了剑桥雅思的小作文。至于大作文，基本可以说是裸考。以至于总结出惨痛的教训，要想写得好，不能练得少。像我这样从不练笔，是写不出好文章的。写作不能离的就是模仿和背诵，外加练习。而背诵的最好材料，无非还是真题中较容易加以利用，举一反三，适合自己文风的范文篇章。

//口语//

关于口语，之前也背了几篇part 2的话题，结果一坐到面试官的面前，脑子一片空白，信马由缰的乱说一通，也是真真实实表现了平时的水平。结果意外的得到7.5，还是很开心的。我觉得口语考试，态度永远是第一位的。虽然我很紧张，但我牢牢记住我的口语老师说过的“抽筋都要笑，豁出去了!”我真的从这句话中获益很大，整个人就是一种拼了的感觉。而且，我不得不说，以我的经验，好听的发音对整个考试真的会有大加分。

我的口语老实说离流利表达绝对还差的很远，但是我在上大学之后，比较注重我的语音语调，也有刻意把我的口音雕琢成美音。口音纯正，对整体印象和打分都还是起到很大影响的。而口音的练习，国际音标要能发准以外，模仿是我唯一的途径。至于口语话题和素材，21世纪报是个很不错的来源。

其实内容比不上思路重要，材料比不上逻辑重要。与其说一些很炫的高分词汇和短语，不如用自己熟练掌握的话语把问题回答的全面、可信、深入。我考试时几乎还是平常会说的那些很普通的话，组织的好，力量就很大。

以上就是我一点学习经验，其实在英语学习和雅思考试的路上，我还是一个刚上路的菜鸟，路漫漫其修远兮，我将和大家一起上下而求索。

口语和写作都是特别需要积累的，可以说，写作突破的周期，最短也要一两个月。但是听力和阅读，既是中国考生的强项，有容易通过考前突击提高，就特别多写了一些。关于写作，我问了很多强人，大家总结的经验就是背诵+模写。

我的小作文是流程图，但是之前我把剑桥雅思上其他范文小作文都背过几遍，所以小作文的篇幅，大体结构，心中有数，没有那么慌乱，我认为小作文的背诵是必须的。至于大作文，精读范文之外，我推荐模写。我看过《剑桥雅思写作高分范文》，那里的范文和翻译质量都不错，在每个大话题中，选两三篇对照中文释义模写，然后不断改正，直到和范文一致。很多写作达人都是这么推荐的。毕竟学书面语言，背诵和模仿永远是最有效的。

其实努力是一方面，还要用巧劲，阅读和听力我完全就是着重真题!真题!这是我觉得最有价值的一条，复习迎考的一个半月，我每天耳朵上只听英语，听剑桥，听强化我口语美音的一些脱口秀，听英文歌，总之脑子里绷着的弦就是英文英文英文!整个状态就提上来了。

今天由于时间仓促，所以寥寥几笔，之后如果大家需要，会详细的写下各项具体的备考经验。本人不是牛人，不是强人，一直以来是默默仰望别人，羡慕别人，觉得自己英语很差的一个小小的我。只要付出不多的努力，任何人都会比我强。考的成还可以，有必然更有偶然。说不上什么经验，只是写了自己的一些实践，供大家仅作参考。

雅思口语Part2话题范文:interesting tourist attraction

Describe an interesting tourist attraction

You should say

Where it is

What you can do there

And explain why you think it is interesting

高分范文：

Ok then, well the tourist attraction that I’d like to talk to you about is West Lake, which is here in Hangzhou. And I apologize if you’ve already heard a lot of other candidates talk about it, but out of all the tourist attractions I know, West Lake is the one I’m most familiar with, and I really do think it lives up to its reputation as being one of the most beautiful lakes in China.

But anyway, as for where it is, well as I mentioned just now, it’s here in Hangzhou, but to be more specific, it’s actually right in the heart of the city, so um… yeah, it’s very accessible, and also very easy to find. For example, it’s only, like, a five-minute taxi ride from the train station, and you can also get the subway there.

And um… regarding what you can do there, well, a good way to take in all the scenery is to just wander around the lake. And there are also quite a few teahouses dotted around the lake, some more expensive than others, I might add, so if you do go to one, it’s a good idea to take a quick look at the prices before you sit down and make yourself comfortable, otherwise you might be in for a bit of a shock!

What else? Um..…. Oh yeah, of course, you can go on a boat on the lake, and if it’s your first time there, then it’s something you should definitely do, because I’d say it’s probably the best way to experience the beauty of the lake and its surroundings.

So yeah, it’s a really interesting place to visit, and if you haven’t been there yet, you should definitely go if you ever have the chance!

Notes:

lives up to - If someone or something lives up to what they are expected to be, they are as good as they are expected to be.

right in the heart of the city – in the centre of the city (地方、位置或时间)准确地，恰当地，精确地 You can use “right” to emphasize the precise place, position, or time of something)

it’s very accessible -易到达的(If a place or building is accessible to people, it is easy for them to reach it)

take in the scenery -看风景

dotted around -散落 (If things are dotted around a place, they can be found in many different parts of that place.)

I might add - 我应该补充一下

make yourself comfortable - 让自己舒服些

you might be in for a bit of a shock - 你可能会大吃一惊!

雅思口语Part2话题范文:good service

Describe an experience on good service in a shop or a restaurant.

When

Where

What

And explain why you think it was good service.

范文：

Let me talk about the experience in an Apple Store. I had a small Mac Mini which I had used for three years. One day in April, the machine could not boot without warning. I tried various methods but couldn’t solve the problem, so I sent it to the nearest Apple Store which was located in the Wangfujin. That shop was newly open and it was quite spacious and there were not many people in there. There was a young man who took my mac, and checked it thoroughly. He asked several questions politely about when the machine was black screen, and what I was doing the last time the computer was fine. After a couple of minutes, he advised me that the hardware of the machine was good, and there was something wrong with the software, and it was best to reinstall the operating system, which would take me ten minutes before it was finished and reminded me that all the data in the computer would be erased. After I agreed with his suggestion, the young man immediately started to install the latest operating system for me. Several minutes later, thanks to the young man, my Mac Mini was reborn.

I was quite satisfied with the service the young man provided, he was obviously well-trained, and he was quite patient to fully understand what problem was with my mac and used his professional skills to deal with it. Besides, he was very proficient in his field, and seemed very reliable to me.

雅思单边类作文具体实例

题目

Telecommuting refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades.

How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?

分析

这是一篇谈论在家上班的议论文，题目的论述中谈到在家上班的含义及其不可阻挡的趋势，要求我们探讨其对当今社会的影响。 毫无疑问，这是一个单边支持型的结构，即在引言段进行重述和表达观点以后，主体段落的任务就是一一陈述在家上班的趋势对社会造成的种.种影响。

主体范文

The most obvious changes may be apparent in the normal offices of companies, governments and other organizations. If even half the working week is spent telecommuting from home, then we would initially expect many desks in the office. As offices grow smaller, workers coming in for the day would be expected to share with their absent colleagues. This, in turn, may affect the social atmosphere of an organization, however, as less social contact with one’s colleagues could harm morale and loyalty.

(主体段落之第一段：阐述在家上班对于许多公司，政府和其他结构的办公室的影响，一是有空荡荡的感觉，二是对组织的凝聚力有破坏作用。)

For the individual office worker, telecommuting would mean spending more time at home. For a parent with young children, this may be a blessing. Moreover, many telecommuters would be able to work the hours they wished, having a nap in the afternoon, for example, but working some hours in the evening. One substantial benefit for all telecommuting workers is that there will be no need to travel to work, allowing more free time.

(主体段落之第二段：阐述在家上班对于职员个人的益处，一是他们可以有更多的时间照料家庭，二是工作时间可以自己随意安排，三是不必浪费时间在上下班的路上。)

The structure of urban life is also likely to be affected by telecommuting. We would expect to see fewer cars on the road during peak hours and, eventually, a smaller concentration of offices in cities’ central business districts. In short, people will have less reason to travel to city centers from outlying areas. As more people work and live in the same location, shops and cultural events will likely relocate themselves out of the city center.

(主体段落第三段：阐述在家上班对于城市生活结构的影响，一是高峰时段的路面交通的减少，二是城市中心商业区的规模的缩小，三是商业和文化将向城市外围迁移。)

2.雅思8分学习经验 篇二

辞职备考45天 雅思一战8分经验

4月成绩出来了，总分8.0（听力8.5，阅读9，写作7，口语7.5）。以下是我的雅思备考经验。

1、雅思计划

我是狠下心辞职复习的雅思，时间为一个半月（3月2日——4月24日）。现在回想起来有点多，到4月份的时候，复习材料就不够用了。用的资料很常规，剑3-6。

2、总体复习

雅思是一个科学的考试，所以一个科学的复习方法会很有效果（不像咱国内的破考试，嘻嘻）。我不推荐那种一天阅读、一天听力、一天口语的专题式复习。复习的效果需要在状态的延续下得以巩固。所以，合理分配每天的时间到不同的版块是最好的。因为我的写作最弱，所以我分配的时间是2小时阅读、1小时听力、1小时词汇、1小时口语、1小时语法和4小时写作（当然啦，在我喜欢偷懒的性格趋势下，每个版块的时间都有缩水，但也都保证了至少70%）。而且时间也最好能固定下来，比如上午先听力再阅读，下午弄作文和口语，晚上可以做语法或者词汇，这样能把自己的状态稳定下来。因为我工作两年都没怎么正规系统的碰过英语，所以一害怕就每天狂轰近10个小时。现在想想也大可不必，尤其是英语基础很扎实的鸭友，一天又5个小时就应该足够了。

有很多鸭友可能和我一样，希望早点把生物钟调整到考试时间，well，我在一开始也是报着这样美好的愿景的。但现实完全不给我面子。平时上班习惯了9点才来精神，8点开始做题根本就不*谱。而且因为上班的时候加班、做案子都是晚上12点，那个时候才是最有神的阶段。所以说，生物钟调与不调都没什么关系，能保证复习的时候精力充沛最重要。等到考试的时候一紧张，生物钟马上就自动走准了。

2、听力

我的听力平时模考成绩并不太好，一般也就是7.5和8的样子。估计是考试的时候比较紧张，所以发挥好了一点点。在听力复习上我没有太多感觉，都是些很老套的建议，比如仔细检查，注意语法，实在分不清大小写就全大写之类的，也就不浪费大家时间了。不过有一点我觉得挺重要，就是放松，不要死扣在细节上而忽略了对讲话人语气、语调的把握。

3、阅读

雅思的阅读有很多资料，如果可能的话，尽量还是以剑桥系列为主。尤其是中国人模仿ESOL出的阅读，可能会有一些似是而非，没必要在那些题上死磕。

准备过程要严格注意时间，有的大侠建议将时间卡在55分钟。我倒建议鸭友们能在第一轮复习的时候（也就是做第一遍的时候）变态一点，把时间限定在50分钟，激发一下潜能。第二遍再做的时候就不要限定时间了，细细品味每篇文章和每道题的感觉，试着做做笔记，再有功夫的可以像我们读小学的时候那样归纳

一下段落大意。第三遍做题的时候因为已经对文章和题目很熟悉了，就规定20分钟内完成，回味解题思路。（PS，做阅读的时候最好不要再书上直接写，从网上下标准的答题纸，一来可以反复利用真题，二来也可以最佳的还原考试场景）。按照这个策略，鸭友们至少要保证将剑桥系列的每篇阅读认真做3遍（听力也是一样，嘿嘿），真的很管用！第一遍是卡时间的模考，后两遍用于总结归纳。

关于T/F/NG这类很头疼的题，我有一个小小方法。对实在没把握的题，可以用“取非”的方法进行验证，也就是在题干中加NOT。如果和原体相符，就是 F，反之就是T，原文未出现此类statement就是NG。这个方法看上去很傻，但实际效果还是不错的。尤其适用于那些带有程度描述的题。大家不妨试一试。

还有一些妙招也挺管用，比如什么先读题在看文章，标记年代、人物和大写字母之类，我就不赘述啦！

4、写作

我的绝对弱项。我一直就是那种能写的很多但写不好的人，中文的写作习惯也一直对雅思作文有所影响。所以这一部分复习是我花了最大力气的，写作练习和提纲训练加在一起写了不下120篇。平均一天3篇是肯定有的。不过也不建议大家都写这么多，到后期会导致头晕、恶心等并发症= =！。

写作我想说的就两点，一是构思，二是模版。

关于构思，不是写作大牛的鸭友们最好不要挑战考官的逻辑和思维，还是用最简单的结构，最直接的说理比较*谱。毕竟能把自己的理由陈述明晰就已经能有 6.5+了，8分的牛文就让牛人们去写吧，咱们踏踏实实的得个7分也就够了，哈哈！构思的速度也要有所要求，如果有和我一样反应比较慢的鸭友，最好能抽一段时间来专门进行提纲训练：在规定的时间内列一个提纲。我这样做了10天，列了30多个提纲，感觉后来再写文章会顺畅一些。

再有就是模版了。现在好多鸭友都在用模版，或者是自己在做模版，但收效甚微，有的时候还帮了倒忙。我猜是因为考官们已经神经过敏了，一闻到模板的味道就马上5.5，不免冤枉了很多有实力的考生。现在绝对是句型大于模版的时代。但不要试图把这些句型、表达组织成一篇文章来记忆，那样就又模版化了。比如小作文，我们只需总结上升怎么说，下降怎么说，到考场上根据感觉自由组合，就能保证绝对的连贯和自然。还有就是漂亮句型的来源，网上很多闪光句因为已被广大的鸭友用烂了，只能沦落为参考。我给大家推荐一个好来源：雅思阅读文章。如果仔细观察，就会发现那上面有太多可以借鉴的词句了。我记得是剑4还是剑5有一篇阅读，是调查员工工作状态和公司管理模式的，整个一篇文章就是一个小作文的绝佳范文。当然，雅思考官写的范文也是不可多得的好材料，但看那些范文更多的不是看表达而是看构思和成篇。

5、口语

没啥好说的，口语真的很难在短时间内有质的提高。其他应试技巧请参看其他的经验总结，已经归纳的很详尽了。值得一说的是美剧，复习的时候保证每天看2个小时，既放松身心，又训练了听力口语，何乐而不为呢？推荐风行、迅雷看看等烤鸭必备软件，嘿嘿。

6、机经

一直听人家在说机经机经，考前也狠在网上搜了一搜，发现那真是浩如烟海。

一气之下就赤裸上阵了。呵呵。不要对机经报有太高希望，尤其是听力和阅读。但无忧雅思口语的机经可以参考着准备，虽然命中的几率不高，但防患于未然还是有必要的。就比如说本人，口语的topic准备了一箩筐，包括很难的LAW、很新的 Public Facility，但最后那个老头就问了我一个something you wanna buy in the future，真是当场喷血！

一不小心写了这么多，辛苦大家坚持看完了。觉得雅思的很多复习感受不是三言两语能说的明白的。但不管怎样，制定一套详尽的雅思备考计划并扎实的按照计划执行，多根据自己的情况总结规律，发现方法还是一个放之四海而皆准的真理。就像一个考了8.5的大牛说过的，一般的雅思经验技巧只能帮助那些想考7的鸭友，真正目标在7.5以上的需要自己独立的思考。

3.雅思写作8分技巧 篇三

8分标准：语言上面的要求和7分的差不多，但是重点在idea上，一定要能用很新颖的例子来论证别人想不到的观点。由此可见，基本上这个level是完全不同于7分标准了，这个时候语言的表达已经是相对次要的了，更加突出的是学生的独立思考能力和创新能力。这个能力不仅与语言考试相关，与各个学科都相关，它是对一个学生素质的综合考察。

加强阅读：要有效地提高英语水乎，必须作大量的阅读。

重视背诵 ： 英语宜多诵多背，把一些句型、短语，一些文章的片段或全篇。

多写多练 ： 写作能力必须通过反复实践才能获得。

雅思考试写作范文：遵守社会法律规范

Task:Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

思路解析：

应该遵守：法律和法规是社会有序运行的前提，它们规范了人们的行为和思想，让人们的活动能限制在一个安全的，合法的范围。相反，一旦人们恣意妄为地来忽略这些法律的话，整个社会会陷入混乱。举例，如果交通法规不被遵守，则会出现大量的车祸。如果刑法不被遵守的话，则会出现大量的社会犯罪。

不应该遵守：对于那些不公正的法律，人们应该被授予足够的自由来进行对抗。举例，如果美国今天仍然保留着奴隶法案的话，则今天的美国黑人将处境悲惨，没有教育，医疗，工作和投票的权利。可以看到，这样的法律必将引发来自黑人的愤怒，反抗，甚至是战争。

参考范文：

Nowadays, there is an assertion that the freedom of citizens should be limited; otherwise it might harm the social laws and justice system, thus making our society unstable. Personally, this view is psychologically right, while it overlooks the importance of fighting against the unfair laws freely.

Firstly, there is no doubt that obeying social rules and laws is the fundamental obligation for all individuals, for the reason that they serve as a key function of ensuring our society running on the right track. Obviously, these regulations define the borders between the right and the wrong, the social ethics and day-to-day conduct standards, all of which can instruct and regulate citizens to act and think in a lawful, polite and safe way. Otherwise, the ignorance of these regulations, or so-called “an absolute freedom”, will trap our society into chaos and even malfunction. For example, if the traffic laws were disrespected, it is expected that all streets and highways will be full of congestions and car crashes caused by wrongdoings in driving like blind over speed or overtaking. Similarly, if the criminal law were absent, then there will be no concern of punishments for committing crimes. Consequently, illegal activities including thefts, robberies, arson, rapes, vandalism and murders will be overwhelming, which will not only place the poverties and lives of the public in the danger, but also destroy today’s civilization in a long term.

However, there is always a justification that people should be allowed to freely question and topple those unfair laws that are the barriers of democracy development. In history, the typical example is the slavery law in America that defined African-Americans as second-class citizens and deprived their rights of public education, health care and vote. If this evil law were just followed, instead of being eradicated through the pursuit of human freedom, we now can predict clearly that current the community of America would be still full of inequity, discrimination, and massive social disorder caused by conflicts between the black and white.

All in all, I agree that it is very necessary to limit the freedom of the public by confining their behaviors in the bounds of social regulation and laws, which is the pre-condition of social democracy and stability. However, when it comes to unjust laws, the public should have the freedom to eliminate them.

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雅思写作范文：手机影响读写能力

Task：Some people believe that the increasing use of the computers and the mobile phones has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skill，do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

Some educators have warned that the prevalence of mobile phones and the internet has a negative effect on adolescents’ academic ability. I agree with this view.

Firstly, the wide use of “Internet English” is regarded as the culprit of the declining writing skills. One obvious reason is that young adults may make some grammatical mistakes unconsciously because of the frequent use of improper abbreviations and punctuation on mobile devices, and this might pose a threat to their future career where a professional writing ability is required in most companies. Therefore, many linguists have expressed their concerns that the instant messaging and chatting on mobile phones might harm the ability of using formal written English.

Secondly, the poor reading proficiency can be put down to the frequent use of technologies as well. Compared to the older generation, young people today are cluttered with different gadgets, like iPad and iPhone. For instance, with easy access to wifi, they can surf the internet anywhere and anytime to follow the latest information of their idols in another country. However, most social network deliver fragment and useless information, which not only steals time way from solitary reading but also undermine the ability to think independently. In my opinion, this phenomenon should be reversed as soon as possible because reading has a profound effect on a nation’s future.

In conclusion, while these electronic devices make the communication much more convenient, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic performance negatively.

雅思写作范文：与外星人沟通

Task：Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send messages to contact them. Others think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目讲解：

双方观点讨论型，首段可不用明确自身观点，但结尾要明确自身观点。新话题，在联系外星人方面，可从科技、人类生活质量角度详细论述;反对联系外星人方面，可从其性格对人类的影响，以及外星人的意图与未知的能力角度出发，具体阐述。本文自身观点是在人类自身环境安全的情况下，可以试图寻找外星人，但无法确保人类生命的情况下，最好不要联系打扰外星人的生活。

Sample answer：

With advancement of societal technology, certain scientists work for looking for other intelligent life forms who may not exist on the earth such as aliens. While some people argue that contacting with them is likely to bring danger to human. Therefore, the essay aims to critically discuss both views and come up with my own opinion.

That a number of researchers try to find other planets’ living species has to be admitted that pursing that curiosity is one of mankind’s nature. Additionally, by exchanging ideas with aliens about historical progression and academic discussion and so on, mankind’s world has the opportunity to make immense progress in modern technology by giving inspirations to scientists for pushing the frontiers of science which may solve particular thorny issues such as environmental pollution. On the other hand, as far as some researchers are concerned, it lays a solid foundation for people to possess an improved quality of life who live on other planets in order to avoid diseases and disasters brought by serve atmosphere pollution and doomsday respectively.

While, simultaneously, others claim that touching with aliens probably breaks seemingly peaceful earth and brings unexpected danger. Firstly, it is likely that being greedy, exploitative and violent, aliens are searching for somewhere to harvest for water, minerals and fuel, contributing to meeting unprecedented risk by telling them the man’s existence. Furthermore, people know nothing of extraterrestrial intelligence intentions and capabilities so it is impossible to predict whether they will be benign or hostile. For example, earthlings will may be slaughtered and enslaved as colonized countries in the past time.

4.雅思听力8分怎么拿 篇四

在雅思听力中，有重复和更正的地方就有可能存在考点

实践运用：Practice makes perfect

英语有句谚语“practice makes perfect”。回忆一下你学习任何一种技能的过程。无论是骑自行车还是走路说话，都是重复同一类动作的过程。可以这么说，任何技能的获得，当然包括英语这项语言技能，均来自重复。一种事情重复多了，便产生了感觉和深刻的把握。因此，在提高英语技能时，也应该遵循重复原则。

5.雅思写作8.5分：及案例分析 篇五

雅思写作除段落外，前后句子方面也会出现不连贯的地方。下面我们举一个关于男女在不同的家务活上所花费时间对比的统计图为例来说明：

Men spent most time(79 minutes per week)on gardening, but the largest part of women time was taken by caring babies.In contrast, men only took 4 minutes

to look after the family elderly.上例中的第一句因为没有上文，所以我们可以看出是比较男女在做家务方面的极值(最大值);在句式上第一句是过程，第二句是评价，句式不单调，而且中间有转折关系的连词but，逻辑关系明确;整个句子也比较长，一个大的并列句其中还有动名词的运用，所以写得很成功。但第二句话虽然有in contrast 和前面相呼应，主语又转回men，这样这组句子是以写男性做家务的时间安排为主要内容，还是以最大项或最小项等各个项目为线索来展开就混为一体，造成最终出现分析混乱、条理不清的问题：

从学生的回访情况看，图表作文写成这样，即便单词和句法都没问题总分也会低于6分。这也可能是很多考生反映的写作感觉不错但分数压得很低的原因之一。

解决措施一般建议把要比较的类别先写出来，如as to the item of.../ in 1995…/ for men…/ concerning the care of family old…等，然后再写某几项的类比或者反比。在比较时切忌不要把某一项目和年限或者性别等的比较纵横交错在一起。

此外图表作文中还有这种情况：两个原始数据都写出来了，而且也用了转折或者排序如but, next等信号词，但缺少对这两个数据的主观评价，读起来就显得凌乱，没有线索。如：

Cleaning cost women 70 minutes, but men only spent 50 minutes.这两个数据都是原始数据，没有对其评价的表达。即使是写出70和50的关系，如 20

minutes less，也没有表示出这两个数据在所有数据中的地位是极值还是第二大值，也就是说没有写出来采这两个点的原因。所以前后两部分一般把所有的数据都罗列一遍的文章我们称作流水帐，某考生反馈为5分。处理方法有很多种，比较简单可行的是在其中一个数据后用“逗号+同位语”的形式表分析和评价附加上去，如：

Cleaning cost women 70 minutes, the largest part among the household work, but men only spent 50 minutes.议论文中的连贯主要体现在主位的频繁转换、话题游移以及小句关系的断层等方面，主要原因有以下几种：

一种是认识问题，学生由于对事物缺乏深入、细致的理解，对事物发生的前因后果、来龙去脉没有弄清楚，表述时便少了一些必不可少的环节。一般年龄比较低的考生容易出现这个问题。另一种是受句法或者词汇所限，不能完全表达出全部的逻辑分析。大部分作文分数在5-6分的考生都会有辞不达意或者句法表达不够恰当的地方。还有一种是没处理好由思考向语言的转化。心理学中把思考时所用的语言叫“内部言语”，而把说出来或写出来的语言叫“外部言语”，由于思维的速度大大高于表达的速度，“内部言语”一般是简约而不完整的，它不太受语法规则的约束，用词欠斟酌，也不连贯，到了表达的时候，我们要经过推敲，使之完善起来。思考常常在瞬间完成，这时留在我们头脑里的往往是首尾环节，中间的环节被省略或淡化了，形诸语言文字的时候，必须把它们添补上，对方才能明白。如果表述时缺少这些中间环节，语言便不连贯。下面分别举例说明： 有一类常见的大作文是双边议论型的，即有人认为A好，有人认为B好，要求discuss两方面的优缺点。这种文章不可避免要涉及到A和B的比较，所以比较时经常出现这样的句式：

Driving a private car is more comfortable than taking a bus, but taking a bus is far more economical than the fuel cost.这组并列句中前面一句是以开私家车作为句子开始的，而but后的一句是以坐公交车

为出发点的。如果说并列句中前后两部分主语不同是可以的，但问题是第一句中比较的对象是坐公交车，是宾语，而第二句中又变成了主语，所以就造成主语频繁转换的问题，令读者眩晕。其实修改也很简单，只要把第一句的主语和宾语互换位置，然后把more改成less即可，这样前后一气呵成，后面的一句主语也可以用代词替代，更为简洁。

第二个连贯方面常见的问题是话题发生游移的问题，一般我们称为“跑题”。如在一篇阐述城市居住环境的议论文中，最近我辅导的一个学生这样写：

People living in large cities often suffer from too much pressure.They can’t go to sleep easily.An example is my parents who work hard everyday so that they seldom have time to rest.After one year, my mom’s hair turned white.If we work all day without rest, nobody will go on.A day has 24 hours.8 hours is for work, 8 is for rest and the other 8 is for play.其实上面的一段话中的每个句子虽然比较短，措辞稍显简单，但总体而言写的还可以。只是放在一段中就有一个中心观点不够明确的问题。如果按照第一句话中所表达的那样，这段应该围绕“居住在大城市的人压力大”为中心来展开段落，例如：可以写压力来自哪几个方面，也可以写压力大会造成什么样的后果，还可以写怎样减压。但是作者先写压力大的后果是不能入睡，接下来举了一个自己的父母忙于工作没有时间休息的例子，然后就评价不休息的后果，再就转入到一天的时间分配，这是典型的汉语“线性思维”模式。句子不断发展下去，但是离主题越来越远。其实从“父母忙于工作”开始，这段中的内容就已经有点游移了，所以应该尽快收回。

最后来看一下小句之间的关系断层的问题。

In a completely alien environment, a very young student may feel very uncomfortable because the language, food and entertainment etc.of the local people are rather different from the familiar homeland, so cultural shock needs a long time to adapt to.如果是熟悉跨文化交际这个话题的人来讲，这一个大长句写得应该是很不错，由一个主句、一个原因状语从句和so引导的并列句三个小句组成。但是最后一部分中的cultural shock和前面没有任何的联系，而且这是一个比较专业的词汇，读者层次不一，不能保每个人都能顺利地过渡到下面的观点中。之所以出现这样的问题是因为在第二小句和第三小句中缺少了一个“桥梁”：这种种不适我们称作“cultural shock”。加上这一句，表达就显得流畅多了。

6.雅思7.5分经验总结 篇六

考雅思就像谈恋爱一样，要想拿高分就多和雅思在一起。分享一个我特别喜欢的英语单词：commencement。Commence是开始的意思(动词)，而commencement除了作开始的名词外还有毕业典礼的意思。这似乎说明，一个阶段的结束是下一个阶段的开始，只有不断学习不断前进，才能登上巅峰。Today you do things others won’t do, tomorrow you do things others can’t do!下面分项介绍我的7.5分经验!

1. 语法

如果高中时语法学的比较好，就不需要特别关注了。事实上，英语到一定境界后是不会下意识的去考虑语法的;

2.词汇

按四六级、雅思/托福、GRE的顺序循序渐进。先用单词书一次大量地记忆，然后通过听说读写做题看电影日常生活等各种途径加以重复。当你在实际生活中见到不久前刚背过的单词是你会发现世界是如此美好……特别说明一点：我觉得通过词根词缀来记忆单词只对词汇量5000以上的人有效，而当词汇量达到10000以上后这将成为最重要的词汇记忆方法;

3. 听力

可以在几个月内迅速突破。在初期不建议大量使用VOA/BBC等新闻听力来练习。我觉得我用的那套听力材料不错(step by step 第三册，有点难)，现在有新版，为step by step 3000;

4.阅读

最容易突破的项目，也是中国学生普遍最厉害的，只要有较好的词汇和语法基础，辅以大量练习即可。强烈推荐新概念第四册!

5.口语

由于我不觉得自己口语有多么好，所以就不说太多了。不过我觉得口语比较难以快速提高，可以与听力一起练习。关键是多开口;

6.写作

和阅读一起练习。平时注意在阅读中积累词句表达，多写多修改(先自己修改再找别人修改)。看一看英文修辞方面的书会有帮助的;

7.英语考试

我觉得英语考试不要过于关注所谓的技巧。英语考试要得高分，7分靠实力，2分考技巧，1分看运气;

8.最后总结

要学好英语有很多种方法，这里讲的是我的学习经历(如果我也算是基本学好了英语的话)，世上还有很多别的方法。但是学不好只有一个原因：没有花时间去学。所以，如果你真的想学好英语，那么不要说上班忙，学习任务重，没有时间，从明天再开始……不要有任何理由和接口，马上拿起任何一本英语书。记住：不管做什么，全神投入并且乐在其中，那么你肯定能做好!

雅思写作思路之坚持与改变

8月雅思写作预测题目：坚持与改变。Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

支持正方

Being perseverant plays an indispensable role for people to make achievement. For example, Steve Jobs, who insisted on his design even in his most difficult time, created unparalleled products. If it was not for his persistent effort, the communication today would probably not have been so ‘simple but powerful’.

支持反方

Holding on to one’s stand and avoiding change can make people blind. A convincing case is that many technology companies, which stuck to the old business mode and ignored the latest development, ended up being phased out, e.g. Nokia. In comparison, others chose to change voluntarily and now top the sales board, e.g. Samsung.

People can find their suitable place during purposed changes. Taking myself as an example, I picked up several hobbies in my childhood, practiced and hoped that I could do well, e.g. music and sports, but it turned out that I did not have such talents. However, when I started learning painting, I found it is the area where I could do justice to myself. I was so into it that I won several awards. In the end, I was admitted by one of the most prestigious art institutions in China.

雅思写作思路之大学专业是否该男女生人数平等

208月雅思写作预测题目：大学专业是否该男女生人数平等。A university should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

支持正方

Due to their distinct (不同的) thinking patterns, females can inject new ideas into the workplace, which may give birth to serendipitous (意想不到的) outcomes. 男性女性的就 业录用要平等; 女性参军与当警察

Facts have proven that women can stand out in the majors which are generally considered male-?‐dominant, e.g. Madame Curie. 男性女性的 就业录用要平等(例子可以选择更 换 ); 女性参军与当警察 (例子更换)

支持反方

Men and women are born with physical difference. Thus, male employees are advantageous in logic, abstract thinking as well as strength, and are naturally good at subjects such as civil

engineering, mechanics, computing science, etc. 男性女性的就业录用要平等(例子更 换 ); 女性参军与当警察 (例子更换)

Contrarily, females are characteristically (典型地) more capable of being patient, prudent and perseverant, and therefore are easily to be enrolled in language, literature and education programmes.

男性女性的就业录用要平等(例子更换 ); 女性参军与当警察 (例子更换)

When considering future career, the opening of various jobs have different demand on the number of male and female staff. If we forced universities into accepting equal number of male and female students, it would lead to predictably unemployment, which would in turn burden the government, e.g. the society cannot accommodate a large amount of male

nurses. 男性女性的就业录用要平等(例子更换)

论据共享题

男性女性的就业录用要平等

The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

女性参军与当警察

Some people think women should play an equal role as men in military or police force. Others say women are not suited for such kind of work. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

雅思写作思路及技巧之健身器材是否能提高人们的健康

健身器材是否能提高人们的健康。Some people believe that to improve public health, we should increase the number of sports facilities; others believe that it has little effects and need other measures to improve it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

支持前者 公民除了交税是否还有其他社会职责(税收用于提供公共服务，但意识靠个人)

In many countries around the world, sports facilities are diminishing at a staggering rate.

The lack of fitness facilities has already led to a sharp decline in the general public’s involvement in sports activities, which is a real threat to the well-?‐being of the general public.

If a wider range of sports and fitness facilities were accessible, people would be more willing to spend time in these facilities to train their bodies and improve their fitness or even release daily pressures, instead of living a sedentary life at home, watching television and playing computer games.

支持后者 公民除了交税是否还有其他社会职责(税收用于提供公共服务，但意识靠个人)

The building of sports facilities may become a waste of taxpayers’ money because some charge unreasonably high membership fees that are far beyond average people’s reach. 政 治家与科学家，孰重孰轻(政治家提供公共服务)

The priority should be given to the development of sectors that can bring tangible and immediate benefit to the public, such as medical care and educational systems. 政治家与 科学 家，孰重孰轻(政治家提供公共服务)

论据共享题

政治家与科学家，孰重孰轻

Some people think politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both both of views and give your opinion.

公民除了交税是否还有其他社会职责

7.雅思写作7分备考经验 篇七

基本情况：

成绩：7.0 L6.5 R7.0 W7.0 S6.5

四战雅思终过关：5.5—6.0—6.0—7.0

毕业5年了基本没用过英语，9年前过了六级

整个学习周期约20周

写作学习与备考体会

在老外这里学习写作方面的最大的收获是四点(从强到弱)：一是文章的逻辑性，二是少出初中级别的语法错误，三是用几个漂亮的collocation，四是尽量用复杂句。前两个最重要!

关于逻辑性，这一点恐怕是中国学生备考中最缺乏的，因为市面上的一些考试教材，包括各种辅导班的老师都很少提及。逻辑性主要有两点：一是全篇文章要有逻辑，比如先说自己反对一方的观点，然后再反驳之，这点大家应该都能做到。关键是第二点，每一段的各个支撑理由之间，和每个支撑理由内部也要有逻辑性。观点或理由之间应该是logical的链接而不只是用linking词来link。所以，形式上，我的作文也许用first of all，但绝不会再用secondly，thirdly 这样的linker。

另外，少用模板，或者少用中国模板。我曾故意在一篇文章中用了类似这样的“Just like a coin has two sides，this question also has its drawbacks。”那雅思考官老师一看就说你是不是从中国商业书上背下来的，呵呵。

G类雅思写作讲解及范文：Enquiry类

? Enquiry –目的+具体问题+(急切心情+感激+联系方式)

1. I am writing for information about…

2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding…

3. I would be most grateful if you could supply me with the following information.

? End of an Enquiry letter

1. Thank you for your consideration

2. I am expecting your early reply.

3. I am looking forward to your immediate response.

4. In addition, if you could let me have details of … I would be more than grateful.

Writing task 1

? As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town.

? Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Dear Sir,

I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. This visit will be part of our school’s activities to encourage the students to take part in social surveys. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.

First of all, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the exhibition?

I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it?

I look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

George Moore

G类雅思写作讲解及范文：Complain类

? Complaint –说明意图+解释情况+解决方案

1. I am writing to complain about…/that…

2. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something

3. I am most reluctant to complain, but…

4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a complaint about…

Examples:

I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I took on August 16, .

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the duty-free shop in your airport on February 14, .

? End of a complaint letter

1. I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience.

2. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of…/ within 14 days.

Writing task 1

v You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.

v Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my students, and I am falling behind in my assignments.

I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Janice Kennedy

Writing task 1

You have received your pay for your summer holiday part-time job, but your pay is less than you were promised. Please write a letter to the manager of the unit, clearly stating what work you have done and how long your work took. While explaining your case, put forward your demand and suggestion.

Dear Manager,

I have received the $800 cheque which you pay to me as a part-time software programmer in your company during my latest summer vacation. However, I am at a loss why the amount is $ 100 less than you promised to pay me.

It was contracted that a part-time software programmer’s weekly wage is $ 300. I signed the contract with you and consequently worked in your company for a total of 3 weeks. In the period, I went to and from work on time and to your satisfaction, I completed each task that you assigned me without any errors.

Also, no blame about me was ever heard in any aspect. So my total income should be $ 900, which is $ 100 more than that I gained from you. I firmly insist on your kind explanation of the difference and making it up as soon as possible.

Your early reply would be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely